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  • Angel of Vengeance

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    Sorry, I noticed a spelling error or rather more like a word usage error. You used the word purpose in place of propose. It's common to do something like that, but I thought I'd point it out so you can change it. :D
    September 24th, 2012 at 05:06pm
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    I started reading from the beginning, and I enjoy the plot. It's good. However, and I know a lot of people don't like it when other people point out grammar mistakes, but I thought I'd give you a heads up on some things I noticed in your story as I was reading. You are using the wrong word when talking about Zacky. You say his self, when it should be himself, one word too. And the only other thing I've noticed was that you miss apostrophes from time to time in certain words. Like It's because with no apostrophe it's a possessive case word and I don't think you were aiming for that. :D Hope that helps. Other than that, I do like your story and I plan on continuing to read it. :D
    September 24th, 2012 at 04:57pm
  • xPoppinxChampagnex

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    Can't wait for more!! :)
    September 23rd, 2012 at 06:40pm
  • Lucyy Jayy

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    Just read all of it today! Holy shit, this just gets better and better each chapter. They have a roller coaster of a relationship...but they're soo cute together! And the baby, Omg, she's adorable and she isn't even born yet! That's how adorable she is!
    September 23rd, 2012 at 08:11am
  • BriBriSexyTime

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    Ive Okay The ability To can
    September 22nd, 2012 at 07:38pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    What the ?!?!?!?!?!
    September 22nd, 2012 at 06:51pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love this honey.
    September 13th, 2012 at 05:03pm
  • Jon Toews

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    wow im in love with this<3
    September 13th, 2012 at 01:20am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    I really love this story, so good <3
    September 13th, 2012 at 12:03am
  • AloneWolf656

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    Can't wait to read more :)
    September 13th, 2012 at 12:00am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love this story.
    September 8th, 2012 at 10:15pm
  • BriBriSexyTime

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    Ah its been too long. and when i seen this was update the noise that came out of my mouth was not human. I loved the updates.
    September 8th, 2012 at 04:57pm
  • LipstickLullaby!

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    Just read through the whole story, you are a great write btw!
    Can't wait for more updates!((:
    July 7th, 2012 at 09:47am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love the update. Aaron is such a douche!
    April 5th, 2012 at 06:44am
  • Jon Toews

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    danng! love it<3
    April 4th, 2012 at 11:27pm
  • AloneWolf656

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    Great update! Can't wait to read more :3
    April 4th, 2012 at 10:40pm
  • AloneWolf656

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    Great update! Can't wait to read more :3
    April 4th, 2012 at 10:40pm
  • Sue Saloio

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    Hey there... I just realized I haven't comment anything on this story yet... :s
    Sorry... :$
    I love it! *-*
    That proposal was so...OMG! Loved it <3
    keep posting ;)
    September 18th, 2011 at 03:08am
  • lifeissoreckless

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    Aww! Such a cute chapter!
    September 18th, 2011 at 02:11am
  • ckvengenz6661

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    This Is One Of My Favorite Stories To Read...Love This Story...
    September 17th, 2011 at 08:18am
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