Skinny Jeans Have No Place On These Thighs - Comments

I like this:D
Seriously(: I'm gonna subscribe(:

I like this.

The way you write is addictive... it's simple and I can understand where the characters are coming from; they become real people. I like the way you phrase things, and I like the characters and I'm not really saying much of anything here (except, reading back, I just repeated myself), but I like it. I'm also really keen on the little bits of information about the characters at the end, they make me smile 8)

To be honest, the title scared me slightly... I had images of... I don't know, but I wasn't expecting to find something so addictive. I'm subscribing. :mrgreen:

pretty good!it seems to be a slight filler but im ok with that!i hope Ella goes to see marcus!Cant wait for an update so get to it!:P

love it so far. =)
keep updating!

wow. I love this so far. Its amazing story and great writing. Reminds me of the shit I once gotten into. Goodness... Please keep writin aandupdate more as soon as humanly possible. For me? I've got chocolate chip cookies to bribe you with... lol

jinx09:

Wow, I like it already.

The title implies something of an eating disorder.. or maybe the verge of one.

That would be correct.

Can't give away a lot - aside from the main premise of the story, ha ha! But yes, eating disorder would be the words for it.

And of course I would never assume your story had anything to do with mine. Besides, most of the stuff on here is either fan fiction or a way for the writer to put down their own problems. The characters are not always all that thinly disguised, if you'll pardon the pun.

This story isn't going to be anywhere NEAR as long as The Trouble With Purity.

Wow, I like it already.

The title implies something of an eating disorder.. or maybe the verge of one. But the description for the story lacks a bit of telling; just the personalities of the girls.

While I absolutely adore your writing, the eating disorder twist is why I'm so intrigued; I struggle between recovery and anorexia... currently in a remission state. I figured I should explain why I am so enthusiastic about this story.

But, back to the story!
I also love the personalities you've given each of the characters. Only chapter two, and it's very telling. I can identify myself in or a friend in every single person.

I cant wait to read more!

<3
Jinx

PS: Please do not assume plaigerism or a stolen idea at the very least for what I am about to say. As soon as I joined Mibba only days ago, I began writing the outline for a new story of mine, centered around anorexia type two (anorexia with bulimic tendencies, basically), and later full anorexia. Like yours, it is semi-autobiographical (with a bit of fictional fluff for the readers' sake :-P ). I've just started writing the first pages. I wont be posting it until I'm at least half-way through with the story, but I just thought I'd let you know.)

PPS: If I am completely off-kilter about the theme for your story, which could be very well possible as we are still in the opening scenes and there is not much tell in the plot on the story page, do forgive me. :)