Drunk in Paris - Comments

this was truely compelling and so filled with love and passion. Beautifully written and I loved every second of reading it!

how do you do it becka?
just tell me- i must know.

you brought a tear to my eye- especially with the music you chose. it fit so perfectly and definitely made it seem almost heavenly and untouchable. i loved it so much. great job.

oh yeah- and you made me laugh when tre said "crazy ass bitch". i love him for that.

I love it! The visual imaging you were able to create through your writing throughout the story was amazing. Heres to hoping I'll be as good at writing as you someday!

Can't wait for the sequel!!

You
Are
Awesome.

Really... I heart you times a gazillion... that was so damn well written and gah!! I want a message when you write the sequel. Just, everything... I got this visual picture in my head, and it was gorgeous.

I knew Sarah was a crazy bitch...
And Brittney too. I mean, damn... you don't keep Mike away from Billie. Maybe he'll wise up in the sequel? :) *hopes*

I also love how Joey and Ava are getting along. <3 It's cute...

Love it, as always... and definitely want a message for the sequel.

I just loved that story it was such a joy to read with a beautiful ending.

I loved how you described Billie in your story

So looking forward to the sequel.

well done

whoa, that ending was truely beautiful :]

wow i love it, its so beautiful

amazing story....really beautiful. plus, theres a sequel...yay!

thanks.
casey.

Becka!
You made me cry! That was...well I cant find the words now. But I loved it!

Glad to hear there's going ot be a sequal. :D
xoxo Nat.

That was beautiful...
Do, please, write a sequel to this. You'd be missin gout on a beautiful opputunity to show off how amazing a writer you are :D:D

That was a beautiful ending, I really felt for Billie. It's amazing how you can always create a great story.

It's another amazing story Becka<33

(Can't wait for the sequal! )

xx
Sam

This ending is so bittersweet.
Sweet because I loved it to death, and it was absolutley amazing AND I know there will be a sequal [] But bitter because it is in fact, the ending.

Your writing never ceases to amaze me. <3

love it please write more

Virtual Insanity:

J'adore.

Mais, je déteste Sarah.

Nice to see you getting into the French Theme spirit.
Thanks for the comments guys and the concern over my exams! :D
Anywho cloudy sky was the penultimate chapter, I just have a few touches to put to the last chapter and then I'll post it. I really want to add this particular song to the page but I'm having difficulty uploading it.

Thanks for all the comments anyway guys. xxx

J'adore.

Mais, je déteste Sarah.

He's probably thinking about how he can prove how much he loves her and how they do have things in common... more than just sex and kinky titles, anyway.
This is still amazing, and keep working hard for school. We're not that important, we all want you to get the grades you deserve and from this story that should be A's!! Keep this coming when you can, don't bust a gut about it though. And don't forget to do totally un school related things to relax you!!

you're such an amazing writer.
I hope i can write like you one day.
:)

I'm on chapter 6 of this story and had to tell you I think its fantastic.

i think my favorite part was when billie said "what ryhmes with fuck up?"
it made me laugh a bit.

i'm glad that ava finally met someone of billie's family other than his kids- considering she's becoming rather important in his life. only two chapters left, heh?
i hope they're quite excellent.

and billie being an assistant baseball coach. i read that article with ollie and how she talked about him helping coach the kids' baseball team- i couldn't stop smiling! it's just so damn cute how he wasn't really that athletic as a kid and didn't truly care for it.. and now he's one of those dad's out by the field helping kids run to first base. i love it!!

it was certainly a good update and it makes me sad that there's only two more to go- or something of the like.

I Love this story!!<3