Drunk in Paris - Comments

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Would we ever overcome all these obstacles to actually be happy?

Yes. Because the almighty Bobbye says so. You will be together and live happily ever after, god dammit!

I hope.

Becka... you have TALENT.

*does an extremely silly happy dance* :)

that was amazing... that kiss. bliss
oh I hope they can be happy together

Oh dear god that was brilliant.
Amazing work, m'dear. Just...wow.
Each part gets better and better and the way you write draws me into it like a fishing line...lol
This is just so good...
I am in love with this story...
and Billie can be so heart breakingly romantic sometimes...
*melts to chair*

I would gladly go blind at this very moment and have his face as my only memory for the rest of my life.
That line was absolutely amazing. It grabbed something in my chest, probably my heart, and yanked until there was a hollow place where it once was. I loved that line so much- it moved me in this odd way.

I loved that Billie remembered the very dress she wore- and how he expressed it, too. like how baudelaire kind of scared but fascinated him at the same time. just little things that he wouldn't normally remember, he did and i loved that. i think it's just a girl thing, though.

definately a very cute chapter- okay cute is such an over-used, bland word. how about amazing? epic? extraordinary? magnificent?
oh yes.
those words definately fit.

wow i hav only just read this, but i freaking love it, i love all the poetic references in it too, they make it so much more romantic

Ok.
I want to go to Paris.
I want to go to Paris and stand at the top of the Eiffel Tower.
I want to go to Paris and stand at the top of the Effiel Tower with Billie Joe.
That was rad! Ava told Billie how she felt, Billie admitted that he went to Paris for her...Pure romance...Wow...If only real life could be as fascinating.

Wow. Just wow. I think that that chapter was the most powerful one yet. I especially liked the whole "Notre Dame" reference - it makes it so much more romantic and so much more real. I do hope poor Ava sorts out her feelings.

bless ava. I hope he does love her as much as she oves him!

There are three female names I do not trust. Brittney, Sarah and Stacy. You mentioned two of them in one sentence. C'mon Billie, haven't you learned anything from Mike? jeez...
lol
and calm down Ava. Always letting your thoughts take over and you miss out on what he's trying to say. It's Brittney's friend and her name's Sarah. I highly doubt that Billie would have fallen for her.
*mumbles something about how Brittney and Mike are a cosmic oddity*

Great part though, Becka. I loved the rain scene.

Good stuff, good stuff.

MUST KNOW WhAT HAPPENS NEXT!
update more please!
i hope billie still has feelings for Ava..

gah. they will end up together. I can tell.
But they've got obstacles... Charles... Sarah.
You can feel the tension between them, it's so good - the story, not the tension
write more please

Oh poor poor Ava.. She just had her heart broken all over again. And even though Charles is a git, thank god Billie found out where Ava was.
Update soon!

danny elfman was an excellent choice for the part.
i listened to the theme you mentioned and it made me even more emotional. the music went beautifully...
it fit because the moment was so surreal and magical. it held mystery that one cannot figure out. i loved the fact you mentioned the music.
(i also ended up listening to ice dance by danny elfman for the raining and awkward moment scenes)

it was so beautiful. everything about it. camille. mick jones. adeline. awkward moments. baudelaire. cupid.
i can't think of anything that you could have possibly done differently that would've added to the affect. these were my favorite chapters you've yet to write to this story. now where do they go? i will love it no matter what happens.
even if billie decides he likes that sarah girl.
maybe it's not even that he likes her... he may decide that he has to move on from ava.
ahh....
please write soon so i don't go crazy.

Nonono.
They have to be together. ;_;
I'm willing to beg for it. :cheese:

Hey sweetheart.
I feel bad for Ava; so close but yet so far- in both aspects of her life. But it was enough that Billie did try, right? I dunno whats gonna happen next...will they triumph? I hope the scales tip in their favour.
It was excellent and very realistic, Becka.
Nat.xoxo

Aw... Poor Ava... *hugs her*
This chapter was sweet, addorable, awkward, and sad all at the same time... loved it as usual!

whoa, her life's as shit as mine... we should make a club...
this is abso - fucking - lutely awesome, keep it up please. You write so well and you have such amazing SPAG, ahhh I wish I could show my English Teacher - she'd think she'd died and gone to heaven. Please keep updating this, I'm loving it *10*

I knew there paths would cross.... loved it.
I love the way they gingerly moved around the shop and nothing was mentioned about 'the bad stuff that happened'
Ava is wrong - Billie is there to see her and make it up with her... even though he's in Paris for Adeline stuff, he sought her out - now if he never wanted to lay eyes on her again - would he really do that ? mmm I don't think so... I think he wants her back... and she definitely wants him back.

get them back together soon x

she needs osme confidence, but that's what makes this story so amazingly good. please keep it up *10*