Sleeping Beauty: A Modern Retelling - Comments

I can honestly say this story is amazing.
The whole concept just blows me away, really.
I love the relationship between Ville and Jonne. It's just so... original.
I'm actually at a loss for words.
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fucking amazing,
i love it, i hope you update soon

this is a really really great story so far!!! i wish you would eventually write more! it's really original yet still vam

Wow,
This Is Amazing.
Just Like All Your Other Stories I Have Read.
Update When You Can
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<3's

ah, i love it
all of it

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

I'm really enjoying this, especially the language style.

I can't begin to tell you how much I like this. It's so extraordinary and original. Mibba needs stories like that.

I like your narration and characterisation, a lot.
'Nywho... I hope there'll be more soon.

Beautifully written, as usual, especially the wording, and the description, makes it realistic- even with the foundation of a classic fairytale and almost "old-english" words.
he relationship between Ville and Jonne is intrigueing, like their past. And the way they have meshed with American lifestyles, espcially relationship wise captures the reader from the start.

pure talent, realistic and modern, yet enchanting like a fairytale.

xxxZoexxx

I still can't help but feel bad for Jonne, but at least he's getting a potential romance.
I'm not too fond of Ville, just wanting Bam to fornicate with. Poor Bam.
*Has an image of a Ville/Bam fight* It was an awesome image. The shouting, the pushing...ah. =)

Great update as usual. I'm still not sure how to feel towards Jonne though, I want to be sympathetic but can't..

Loved it as always
Aww, Jonne and ryan now he's not a loner lol

And i agree with Lucifers Angel the flashback was good too cause it helped further the story and all

Wow, that was a nice update. And the length was alright. I really liked the kinda flashback part .. revealing things in their past, character growth, background, it was good. And the phone conversation between Ville and Jonne .. even though the words were loud, it didn't sound like yelling, it was still lofty and reserved, aye. But that sort of made them sharper.

Nice update .. more when you can.

Updated.

Yay update i loved it...poor jonne thouh.
I love the way you constructed Ville as arrogant, but not, and the stuff he says i can picture him actually saying ^_^
Yet another great update

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I'm commenting now :P
I really like it. And I love the layout and the roses between paragraphs.
It's brilliant, baby <333

Finally, fucker.
-giggles-
Just kidding. You know I love you, princess.

I'm commenting now :P
I really like it. And I love the layout and the roses between paragraphs.
It's brilliant, baby <333

Ville made me laugh in the last chapter.

I like it though, the way he speaks and what it is he says.

It's good.

I liked the tone, it was rather straightforward. The pacing was good. I can't help but feel slightly bad for Jonne, I don't want him to get hurt/be sad. I like how Ville and Bam are in this story--their personalities.

It was .. different. Direct about things. Of course any progressions with a story are good. And the last part was nice. Good update.