Sleeping Beauty: A Modern Retelling - Comments

Part Three has been posted. I'm extremely skeptical about tone, so please comment on that.

I'm loving this. I've loved all your stories, though, so it's to be expected.
More when you have the time, please. :)

Fabulous .. only to be expected of your work, but this is so well written - a curious mix of upper-class style and modern teenage trash talk. I love how the swear words blend seamlessly into the speech of the characters, yet still leaves them with such dignity. Greta update. Definitely subscribed.

"Now I drank too much last night and I’m going to rip your fucking head off if you don’t shut the fuck up."
Greatest line. It sounds like something that would be said in that faux-polite way.

i loved it and Jonne is in it too...could it get any better? :cheese:

I love the way Ville called Jonne 'pretty boy' :tehe:

"It's almost lesbian porn" :lmfao

Please update when you can ^_^

I've loved your portrayal of Ville in everything you written. Naturally, this is no exception.

Wow...I must say that this is one of the best retellings of sleeping beauty ever!!!! It's a shame though that the stupid artist left Margret Queen *sighs* there just never seems to be any real romance left in the world except my cheMicAL roMaNcE of course!!! Just to let you know I subscribed so keep the chapters comin'!

XOXO-Ruby Gloom-XOXO

Updated.
The new chapter is longer and introduced new characters.

I love it! more please! *subscribes*!

I like the way it's retold, kinda like the baz lurman [sp] romeo && juliet...but better...cause there's Ville :tehe:

Hold on, have I used the wrong font? Everyone else has used that same font! *cries*
Sorry...

Wow, you haven't got many comments for this so far!
^_^ I like it!
I like all of your stories that I've read...(some of which I forgot to comment on).

Problem is, I can't subscribe. Well I can, but it wouldn't work. For some reason my subscriptions are messed up and I only occaisionally get an email. I think it's because I subscribed to too many stories...

So I'll just have to stalk you until you update. Which hopefully will be soon.

I love the wording in this first chapter. It's an idea I'm definately intrigued by. *subscribes*

I've been stalking some of your work before and I was thrilled so far, and now, after reading this chapter as a prologue to a completely different story, I am past thrilled.

I was a bit sceptical at first - Sleeping Beauty and all that jazz didn't sound quite appealing, but knowing you and your storytelling skills was enough to get me to start reading. I loved the sting of sarcasm you had going on throughout the chapter, that's one of those things I really like about your writing -- it's never boring. And the originality itself, yeah, you get the picture.

I can honestly say that I'm looking forward to reading more so now I'm gonna hit subscribe and wait patiently seeing I'm done procrastinating for now.

Sara.

This is my newest story, a retelling of Sleeping Beauty with Vam.

Reviews will be rewarded with picture/profile comments.

But "more" and "Plz update" do not count as comments. Sorry.

Please review and look for more as the week progress.

xoxox
-Dru