Vegas Boys - Comments

It's... it's... it's over.
But I still have the sequel, which I promise I will comment as mercilessly as I did this story. I have... what? Like, two whole pages of comments for this? Wow.
But anyway, it was lovely, dear. I mean, just... wow. And I thought my writing was good. You have shattered my ego with this, I swear.
Expect a bombardment of comments on the sequel soon. I don't know when, but it'll happen.
I promise :D

I have a reeeeeeeeeeeally bad feeling that at some point - whether in here or not - Brendon's gonna do something EXTREMELY stupid and he's going to hurt Kelsey beyond prepare. But it's just a hunch, albeit a really really bad one. I hope that doesn't happen.

WHY?????
Why is Brendon being such a douche??? He's not supposed to be that way!!!!
Ugh! And I really really really REALLY hope he's not just saying empty words to Kelsey. That's just wrong and stupid.
And I'm not sad - I'm freakin DEVASTATED!!! They're so cute together.....

Ahhhhhhhck!!!!!! Don't let him forget her!!!
But I kind of accidently read the summary to the sequel before I even began this, so I know something's gonna happen between her and Brendon and then she'll hook up with Ryan or whatever....
God, I'm thoroughly addicted to this.

That's creepy that Ryan had possibly been watching her in her car... >.>
Gasp! Cliff hanger ending!
I must find out.

Ugh!!! Kelsey's so... so... so... so STUPID!!!!!!! Just... ugh! Why can't she realize that Brendon really loves her??????? She's starting to irk me. >>>>:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
It can't be! Nooooo!!! Just.... Aahdifdskfnvasdfhvnzmc noeihfrxv~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ugh.
Sooooooo not cool. >:

Will it get better? Promise me it will. :(

But-but-but-but....
He can't leave! He just can't!
I mean, he loves her. Right?
Eurgh, this is terrible terrible terrible!

Kelsey's mom's a douche. There's no other way to say it.
And go Kelsey, sticking it to her mom like that.

wtf??? She can't leave!!! NOOO!!!

You have to love Spencer, although he was being an ass at lunch....
Was the band signed? Is that why he didn't want to talk about it?

What the hell, Kelsey? Don't be selfish. Brendon won't forget you. Sheesh.

I feel a sense of forshadowing here as Kelsey's saying how Brendon's never going to hurt her.

Didn't Spencer actually go to the same school as Ryan? Like, Bishop Gorman or something? Am I sounding creepy-stalker-ish right now? I hope not.

Brendon's so sweet. Just... AGH!!!

Brendon's right - all those boys are morons, especially Spencer.

Ewwwww - mushy hands. xP
And, like Kelsey, I hardly ever go to church. I just... don't.
And Spencer... hehe. He's so funny. And Ryan does have teeny-tiny bones!
Oh, Ryan's so pretty. I must agree with Kelsey on that.

Kelsey's dad needs to get his head out of the gutter. I mean, just cuz she's going over to Brendon's doesn't mean they're going to do it. Gosh.
And Brendon's such a dork. But he's an adorable dork, though. Really, he is. <333

Aw Brendon sang for her! <333
How sweet.

I've never actually seen Nightmare Before Christmas. Well, I've maybe seen half of it, but it honestly got a little boring.
And what was Brendon dressed as?
And, finally, YAY!!! She's finally admitted that she was sorry and now Brendon's her boyfriend! I'm so happy right now <3