i love this story, i was reading it on quizilla before...anyway its soo good!!i feel bad for kelsey...i really do hope things work out, i really really do, i geuss ill have to wait and see. and btw i dont doubt you get just as sad, if not more, cause your connections with the charaters ares stronger, since you basically made them...the only difference is you know where its going..but still, so ya great job, keep it up :)
I'll keep my eyes peeled for the - sure to be brilliant - sequel.