Vegas Boys - Comments

God, those girls are so mean! I just want to like slap them or something. Grr.
And I'm glad she's kicking herself for hurting Brendon. She deserves it, so HA.
And frickin' Matt needs to go die in a hole. Seriously.
But I'm done ranting... for now.

Aw! Poor Brendon. :( Kelsey needs to dump Matt on his stupid ass and go to the dance with Brendon.
And she should have agreed to be his girlfriend. She likes him, not Matt.
Sheesh.

Hehe. "If I’ve learned anything in my eighteen years of life, it’s that you can’t make people like you--you can only force your presence on them constantly until they finally give in and pretend to be your friend for a while."
That is very true, lol. Brendon's hilarious.
And yay for Ryan coming along! He's so pretty.

Well, it's about time she likes him. I mean, REALLY.
Loved it.

hehe It's like a fucking rollercoaster!
Priceless.

Hi, so I just read this whole thing through, and it feels like I should leave a comment.

I've never read a Brendon story before that wasn't Rydon, and it's been a long time since I read anything that wasn't slash in general.

Over all I liked it, I liked the storyline and your writing style.
A few grammar mistakes got to me, but it was nothing major and nothing I couldn't easily overlook.

I think the only downside was the cliché's that were used here and there - however I as an author as well know how hard it is to be completely unique whilst writing a story so those are overlooked as well.

Will read the sequel now.

Good job.

haha i just have to say, i may just be reading your story....but its fantastic.

its so funny, but kelsey and brendon together remind me of my boyfriend and me. like when she says "you're a dork" and he says "but i'm your dork," hahah well that exact chunk of dialogue has happened pn numerous occasions between me and my boyfriend. it made me laugh sooo hard.

=]

awesome story!

One of the best ones i've ever read, no lie.

kudos to you!

*runs off to read the sequel*

Wow, that story is amazing.
Wow. Yea, i can't wait till your sequal :]
I love this story

Oh. My. Fucking. God. You are such an amazing writer! Seriously, that was one of the best stories I've ever read on here.
Can't wait for the sequel!

Aww.
I love it!
Good thing there's a sequal. :D
I'd have begged you to death for a sequal if you wouldn't make one. ;]

it's over?!?! ://

I loveddd this.:D

gahhh WEEKS!
i cant wait that long
*beggs*
peez write the sequel
the story is soo good and needs to go on!

aw the penguin thing was adorable and so was the ending

can't wait for the sequel

omg this had to be the best story ive read ever! lol. anyway i cant wait tfor the sequel

ahhhh!!
awesome update. im so sad its over but so excited for teh sequel :]
and i wont lie-a tear escaped my eye while i was reading it :]

SOOOOO SADDDD
D: But I can;t wait till the sequel. I loved this story.

Wow, I loved the story! I can't wait for the sequel!
One of my favorite stories on here.

I almost didnt read the last chapter bc I didnt want it to end:)
anyway I did read it and I cant wait for you to start the sequel.
p.s. I almost cried, well actually my eyes started to water while reading it:)

Great, now my eyes are all puffy and red before I have to go to school. But it's okay because if anyone asks i can say, this amazingly awesome and perfect story ive been addicted to for the past few months just ended and the ending just about broke my heart.
Thank you for writing such beautiful words. This was really amazing and I can't wait for the sequel =]