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  • pointless pineapple

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    Wow, this story is amazing, I love it.
    And for once I read a story where Frank's character fits.
    Definetly stalking this story >>;
    November 27th, 2008 at 09:20pm
  • Lightning Zap

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    That was very very hot!
    This has to be my favourite story by you... I love rebel Frank. :XD
    November 27th, 2008 at 09:15pm
  • NathanL.ovesME

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    hahaha. Best chapter so far. I was so shocked, at both of them.... though I think I saw some of it coming, lol. Damn, this needs to be updated more often, I love it!
    November 27th, 2008 at 08:08pm
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    oooOOOoooh, this is amazing, cant wait for more though ^_^ *hint hint*
    November 27th, 2008 at 06:24pm
  • mia bell.

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    kryptonite.:
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    I will leave a better comment when I'm not as tired.
    But, truly. AMAZING.
    -pats head- Poor darling. [/spam
    November 27th, 2008 at 10:58am
  • kryptonite.

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    I will leave a better comment when I'm not as tired.
    But, truly. AMAZING.
    November 27th, 2008 at 10:51am
  • SpellsUnderTheStars

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    LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    BUT still to short for me. Lol. you'd prob have like a hundred pages and it would still be too short.
    I need my daily dose of your frerardness.
    I hate frerardness and you made me love it.
    Props to you!
    Funny chapter. Lol.
    November 27th, 2008 at 09:37am
  • NathanL.ovesME

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    Aww. Frank's so sweet this time! I love his point of view.
    Mother is weird and really girly... but I'm not sure if I'd want her to be manly manly....
    November 9th, 2008 at 03:31am
  • Kmart.

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    I thought that was a really good chapter. I like how it showed the soft side of Frank, and how he portrays Gerard.

    Great Job!

    :D
    November 4th, 2008 at 11:37pm
  • x's and o's

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    i liked this update=) more soon!
    November 4th, 2008 at 05:50pm
  • Rain On My Parade.

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    wow, i enjoyed this chapter. (:
    Gerards mum seemed really nice and i loved how Gerard smiled at her even though he was kinda annoyed i think it was cute and demonstrated character.
    Franksnot that much of a toughie ha.
    awesome.
    November 4th, 2008 at 05:39am
  • Lightning Zap

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    That was a great chapter. I always love the chapters involving rebel Frank who is really a big softie. It's great. I loved the chapter ded too :)

    <333 Can't wait for more of this story :D
    November 4th, 2008 at 04:32am
  • kryptonite.

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    AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
    Loved it loved it loved it!
    I'm guessing you drew inspiration from our ski trip? Hmmm?
    But I loved it, I really like Gerard's mom, she just seems so awesome.
    It was a few moments later before my mum appeared at the top of the stairs, decked out in pink, and came scrambling down them in her black ballet flats. “Ta-da!” she smiled.
    I don't know why I loved that so much, I think just her words, it made me smile.

    It only took twenty minutes, as opposed to the forty it usually takes for me on the bus, in her new car to get to the front of the school. I made her take the most inconspicuous car we owned. Not that inconspicuous if you ask me.
    I hate how he hides stuff. I'd just like to know what he's afraid of. Does he think that kids are going to start calling him stuck up, or that they're going to use him for money? I'm really curious, he doesn't even tell Jess.

    “Alright, alright. Hold your horses. No need to tap your foot like a gay man,”
    As I've already mentioned...his mom is AWESOME.

    “Hey Ray. It’s chilly this morning isn’t it?” I said, almost laughing out loud at Ray’s attempt to stick a beanie over his hair.
    I couldn't stop laughing at that! I re-read it three times and it still made me giggle.

    “Morning ma’am. How do you do?” he said, sticking his hand out.
    Wow...another side of Frank, the politer version. It kind of made me go wow there, because I don't ever remember you writing him like that before.

    His head lolled against the window, getting whacked every few moments from the motion of the vehicle we were in. I couldn’t stand to see him bash his head against the window anymore so I gently eased him over so he was leaning against my side, his head resting softly on my shoulder.
    In Love That's cute, and I want to see Gerard's expression after he wakes up.

    Beautifully written also, and thank you for adding me in your little dedications. (:
    November 4th, 2008 at 01:17am
  • mia bell.

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    more soon?
    Hopefully, babe. x]
    November 4th, 2008 at 01:02am
  • Palahniuk

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    a ded? thank you *sniffles back tears of joy*
    now! on to ze comment, yes?
    “Alright, alright. Hold your horses. No need to tap your foot like a gay man,” my mother huffed as she got out of the car. I wasn’t even aware that I was tapping my foot.
    haha. Gerard *shakes head*
    i really love this story. i was actually researching my great-grandpa when i got the email.
    Pranas Budininkas in case you were wondering.
    anyway, Frank is so adorable in this.
    so is Gerard. i liked his closeness to his mother =]
    great update, by the way.
    more soon?
    November 4th, 2008 at 12:53am
  • xluckyscrubs13x

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    Awww, poor Gerard. *Smacks Jess over the head* biatch.
    Fank! Go kiss Gerard better!!
    more??
    October 12th, 2008 at 08:24am
  • Canary Cry

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    omg. this story came to me at the perfect time. i was looking for something to do other than what i was supposed to do in computer class, and then bing, a story named Distractions comes up. This story is by far the greatest, most well written Frerards i've read in a while. i love it can't wait for the next update!

    -subscribes-
    October 3rd, 2008 at 01:10am
  • Beast In Repose

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    wow, this is an amazing sotry. Please, update soon?
    October 2nd, 2008 at 02:13pm
  • Palahniuk

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    *confuzzled look* where is frankie?
    and i shall go to read the other story after i finish commenting.
    and whats gonna happen on the ski trip?
    and whos mikeys friend?
    more soon?
    October 2nd, 2008 at 01:54pm
  • kryptonite.

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    Jess needs to stop being a loser and talk to Gerard RIGHT NOW.
    The poor thing, he doesn't deserve it.
    Brilliant update Katty-Bee.
    October 2nd, 2008 at 01:35pm