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  • NathanL.ovesME

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    For some reason, I keep waiting for Frank to show up at Gerard's house as Mikey's friend or babysitter type person, I don't know why...
    I can't wait for the Ski trip.
    I feel bad for Gerard, he doesn't deserve Jess to treat him like that.
    October 2nd, 2008 at 01:31pm
  • Lightning Zap

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    That was a good chapter. Although I want some more Frank in this story because I like the rebel Frank character you've made.
    October 2nd, 2008 at 01:04pm
  • kryptonite.

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    Jess needs to take the stick out of her butt.
    Seriously.
    But at least this Jess can get someone.
    ...and Patrick needs to lay off Gerard...it's not his fault Frank is just so irresistible...
    Beautiful chapter, as usual.
    September 15th, 2008 at 10:33am
  • Lightning Zap

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    :o Sex at school.
    Dude, no girl should really go there unless she wants to be labelled as somethng undesirable. I hope that doesn't happen to Jess.

    Awesome update. Can't wait to read more :D
    September 14th, 2008 at 08:32am
  • nope.

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    Oh...wow. I'm kind of at a loss for words...
    September 14th, 2008 at 07:10am
  • Palahniuk

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    hm i was hoping that frank would be leading gerard
    away for sexytime. guess not =]
    but *gaspeth* no, jess, what the hell?!?!
    and poor gerard, jess is so mean lately =[
    great update, more soon?
    September 14th, 2008 at 01:16am
  • mia bell.

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    ^ Thanks everyone. xD
    September 8th, 2008 at 08:32am
  • kryptonite.

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    I wonder why Jess is being so mean... methinks it's her time of month.
    I wish, Kat's just made my favourite character bitchy. ;)

    I was just re-reading this by the way (as I tend to do because usually I pick up more on things the second time round), and a particular paragraph stood out.

    I’d been so happy when I walked into the class and Jess had brought me crashing down within the space of about a minute. What hurt more is that I had no idea what I’d even done. I had no idea as to why she was so mad at me. It was extremely hard sitting next to her for the rest of the lesson.

    I really felt for Gerard right here. This paragraph just made me really feel for him. I could relate to him so much, and I felt sorry for him, I wanted to give him a hug.
    Kudos Kat.
    September 8th, 2008 at 08:12am
  • Jonne Aaron.

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    OMJ.

    Kat, i love you.

    Do you actually have Miss Thomas for PE? if it's the Miss Thomas I think it is that is... she's my art teacher xD

    This was AWESOME.
    September 8th, 2008 at 08:04am
  • x's and o's

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    really loved this update=)
    September 8th, 2008 at 01:57am
  • Lightning Zap

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    Awesome update! I love it :D
    This is really good. I am really liking how this story is panning out. I wonder why Jess is being so mean... methinks it's her time of month.
    Frank is really cool in this story. He reminds me of the fonze in happy days.

    I'll be reading blush tomorrow afternoon, after work :D
    September 7th, 2008 at 03:02pm
  • xluckyscrubs13x

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    lol, what did you do??
    But omg, awesome update. In my mind Frank looks extremely hot right now *nods*
    Naww he cares about Gerard :B
    And I love Ray being all thug like lol.
    more soon?!?!
    September 7th, 2008 at 02:46pm
  • mia bell.

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    vince noir.:
    Casey Calvert.:
    What the hell is wrong with Jess?
    I second that. You didn't really capture my personality Kat, the only thing that would make Gerard upset around me is that I would be coming on to him too much. :file:
    But interesting chapter, so the world doesn't know Gerard's loaded eh? I cannot wait for more.
    Haha. I know you would be. More shoudl be up soon and the personality thing; sorry. It just fits with the way the plot's meant to go.
    September 7th, 2008 at 09:34am
  • kryptonite.

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    Casey Calvert.:
    What the hell is wrong with Jess?
    I second that. You didn't really capture my personality Kat, the only thing that would make Gerard upset around me is that I would be coming on to him too much. :file:
    But interesting chapter, so the world doesn't know Gerard's loaded eh? I cannot wait for more.
    September 7th, 2008 at 09:32am
  • mia bell.

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    im sosososo glad i got an update for this =]
    i was worried, you, like, died or something.
    is it weird to worry about someone you dont know?
    i dont think it is...
    anyway, awesome update.
    more soon?
    Aww, thanks for worrying about me.
    But I assure you, I'm alive. xD
    September 7th, 2008 at 09:27am
  • Palahniuk

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    im sosososo glad i got an update for this =]
    i was worried, you, like, died or something.
    is it weird to worry about someone you dont know?
    i dont think it is...
    anyway, awesome update.
    more soon?
    September 7th, 2008 at 09:14am
  • nope.

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    What the hell is wrong with Jess?
    September 7th, 2008 at 09:12am
  • blush emphasises

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    Wow Kat this is really good! cant wait to see what happens next
    lol Jess... XD
    August 16th, 2008 at 06:58am
  • Alice Verney

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    cute update
    August 14th, 2008 at 09:33pm
  • mia bell.

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    sorry but im confused about the relationship between gerard and jess ....... and gerard and frank...... dos frank like gerard.... and dont gerard like frank

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    Dear, dear. Well, allow me to explain; it's meant to be a little confusing.
    I get the confusion with Gerard and Frank but what are you confused about with Gerard and Jess?
    August 13th, 2008 at 12:39pm