Doppelganger - Comments

Nice use of second person.
Stories like these fascinate me rather then scare me, so I must say even though your approach was probably to scare the reader, I still though it was splendid. :)

askgvkfjod oh my god. oh my god.

this is just... amazing. i felt nautious and dizzy and terrified, and i was just reading it. i know first hand what its like to saw your arm open - and the idea of not being numbed by your emotional pain; of feeling every single thing he made you do, is just... oh wow. -shudders-

I dont have a favourite bit, because i loved it all
i dont have any lines that particularly affected me, because my heart beat faster with every fucking sentence.

you are utterly amazing. lord, i think i might have to take Roll The Dice down. it just... doesn't seem to compare at all

As soon as he said "chunk" I actually cringed away from my keyboard. Didn't want to read the rest but I had to.

-shudders-

You write in an amazing style. Don't think I've read many that say "you" instead of "I", "he" or "she". Very effective though.

-shudders again-

New chapter soon?

That was...indescribable.

The way you write, honestly, it's incredible. And I love the way you used Mikey's story too. I love your drabbles :arms:

...I suck at commenting.