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  • yay! shes going on tour with Frankie woot woot lol update when ya can
    June 8th, 2007 at 05:25pm
  • great update i like it very much update when ya can
    May 28th, 2007 at 06:51pm
  • color=red]Frank's POV-Three weeks later.

    I've been with Jenna for a few weeks, and I couldn't be happier. She's one person who is one of those people that gets judged by her looks. Boy, are they wrong. They've never been around her for long periods of time like me, her friends and her family. I've learned that she plays the drums very well, but she doesn't have a band. She told she did that to scare the living shit out of people in her hometown. It was pretty funny, but cool. I'm glad that I'm going to spend time with her today. She's actually coming bowling with me, although, I suck at it. We'll see how things go.

    "Hey babe." I said as I picked her up at her house

    "Hey."she said sexily(A/N:Is that a word)

    I kissed her and wanted to stay in that position forever. She noticed, obviously, because she got me out of my trance.

    "Frankie, hello?"

    "Sorry." I said embarassingly

    "It's nothing to be embarassed about." she said kissing me on the cheek.

    We talked the whole way, and we kept each other laughing. Within 25 minutes, we arrived, got shoes and bowling balls. As we started, I noticed that I was really good, but Jenna wasn't. It was cute because she was pouting.

    "I thought I was good! What the hell happened? This isn't fair!!"

    She kicked her feet and made her cute little face.

    "Come here, sweetie."

    She slowly walked over.

    "It's okay."

    "Why the hell are you so good, and I'm not?"

    "Who knows, but I can help you if you want."

    "Well, if sucking means that you can help me, than it's okay then."

    I smiled. I helped her and as I was I showing her a good way to throw the ball, we kissed. We just let the ball go in the gutter and made-out, but we were soon kicked out, and it was really hilarious.

    "Did you see the looks on those people faces?!" she said laughing

    "I think that they were just jealous."

    "Probably."

    "Yeah."

    "That was a little conceited, wasn't it?"

    "Yeah, but we're not like that all the time."

    As soon as we got to my car, we made-out in my car for so long, that it felt like we were there for 5 hours at least. When I dropped her at her house, I wanted to go with her.

    "Frankie, would you like to stay the night?"

    I thought that she'd never ask.

    "Would I say no to you?"

    She shook her head.

    I shut my car off and got out of my car once Jenna was out of the car. I locked it, and we went inside. I've been there only a few times and never have spent the night, so I was happy to be here. We immediately went into her room, since it was around 1 am. Being in her room, I felt nervous, and she was nervous also.

    "Can I trust you not to look at me when I change?"

    " Yes, of course you can."

    I dropped down to my boxers while looking away and waited for her okay to look at her again.

    "You can look now."

    I looked at her, and she was even more gorgeous.

    "You look beautiful."

    She blushed.

    "Thank you."she whispered.

    "You don't have to whisper. It's only us."

    She nodded.

    "You want to get into bed?" she asked.

    "Yes."

    We slipped into bed and immediately, Jenna had her lips on me.

    "Frankie, are you ready?"

    "Yes, you?"

    "Mmhhmm."

    "Are you sure that it isn't just because we're in bed together?"

    "Yes."

    After a fun-filled night, we slept soundly, with her head upon my chest.
    sorry about this. i put it in the comment section. just ignore it. thanks for the comments also!!! :D
    May 27th, 2007 at 05:07am
  • i like!!! LOTS!!!

    more soon???
    February 12th, 2007 at 04:38am
  • Aww this story is gorjuss!
    It's dead cute more when you can please XD
    February 10th, 2007 at 11:13pm
  • eek Loved it I dont think that i read this on ino but I cant wait to read more of this
    update soon
    January 6th, 2007 at 11:14pm