After the Last Midtown Show - Comments

So OMJesus! This is fucking AMAZING. I mean, wow. AMAZING. Did I already say that? Well, it's true, ain't it? lolz Finish it or Gabe will lose his sass. SAVE THE SASS!

oooh OOOH !!

this.. is.. FAB !

update soon (=

x

I just realized I never commented. :tehe:
I love this, please continue soon?

for some reason that third chapter was amazing and i can't even find the right worse to use to describe what it made me feel, let alone to describe the awesome-ness of it. can't wait for more!

Wow. I love this.
New favourite story.

Mmm, what do you have in mind, Mr. Beckett?

Fantastic chapter, yet again =] I love the way you describe feelings and emotions so strongly.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

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I name it.. FANGS UP!

You have to forgive me! I just got caught up and i love it!!!! I thank you so much for posting that comment on my profile tellimg me about it because otherwise i would never have found it!

This story is amazingly well written (not a surprise given the authors) and not at all a common plot line.

I would kill to get inside of your brain for a minute.

Lizzy, you should have seen me today when I was shopping. I was literally sitting there twitching there at times because I wanted to read this so bad but I'm just getting around to it now. Sometimes I hate having my friends over.

Anyways.

I really love how you set up the start of this chapter, although I was understandably surprised; I didn't think that William and Gabe actually ever did anything sexual in the least, not right now at least. Even after last chapter I wasn't expecting it, so this was a giant surprise. For being completely wasted, Gabe's thoughts were surprisingly clear, which I think is quite good in a way; if you made them too realistic, this chapter might have been a tad hard to understand, so kudos on doing what you did.

I'm glad that there's more feelings behind their fooling around besides just lust though; it's obvious that there's something there, especially with this incident. I'm also happy that you alluded to this happening in the past, instead of it just randomly occuring so it doesn't seem like just a random event.

That part with William wearing just the towel reminded me of the episode of TAI TV with the Pause button; have you seen that one yet? It's a very good episode. :)

And that last line! The many meanings that could be behind that... it makes me so excited for the next chapter, even more so than usual.

I'm just going to sit here and twiddle my thumbs until Chloe updates. :)

:arms:

dun da dun...
so i love you both, like alot.
you make me quite happy with the storys that you write. Gabe and William are sexyyy and you both make them even sexier.
oh and chloe, IM ALIVE! :]
Gustav didnt blow me away, i kicked his ass. :]
and you should update learning to fall soon. :]:]:]

:O what's goingto happen?!
Gabe is so funny :) he's all confused and stuff :S
William is a sneaky little bugger, taking advantage of Gabe when he's drunk xD
good update :)

Ooof...
After taht chapter, I'm not sue what to think of William.
Does he really care about Gabe? Or does he just use his little plans to get him into bed? -strokes beard-

Either way, can't wait for the next chapter =)

xoxox

i loveeee this.

this is definitely an interesting story for me to read....i'm usually just stuck on mcr stories and harry potter but i'm definitely intrigued and can't wait for more of this!

I loved it!

Hahaha... ya know, Chloe, Maddy is a genius, we very well should do as she says :D

As for your update! When you let me see the beginning of it a few days ago, I was like :crazy:

It was such a good beginning, and when you let me see the rest... I was simply blown away. You made drunk Gabe just the most adorable thing in the world, and I can just tell he was torturing Will just as much as Will tortures him. They are so fucking amazing together, and... I can hardly believe this story, that chapter you wrote, are part of something that's half mine.

It was truly amazing, and it is also such an honor to write this with you too, love. Like Learning to Fall, I could never have pulled this off without you.

:arms: I love you!

''No one can shake their ass like you.''

Gabe nodded, kissing my cheek once more. ''You're damn right they can't. It's because I'm an immigrant.''

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
Oh man. Flashback to Panic!.

You guys should just get (properly) married already, and sit around writing joint fanfictions all day. You're that awesome.

It makes me sad how William seems to take advantage over Gabe when he's drunk like that. But, I must admit, drunken Gabe is adorable.

I laughed pretty hard when Gabe started hugging the poll and telling it he was going to marry it.

I love this story, I can't wait for the next update =]

dear lord, Gabe is really drunk :)
Gabe is soo weird when he's drunk, it's so funny =D
i can't believe he put William's hair in his mouth xD
this story is great :)
can't wait for more =)

Let me start off by saying that I literally squealed when I saw that this had been updated. I'm surprised I didn't wake up my father.

Slow Down was the absolute perfect song to start this chapter off with. Not only is it one of my favorite TAI's songs at the moment, but I think that it really works as kind of an anthem for Gabe, if that makes any sense. You also really captured William's stage persona very well; I miss seeing that boy in concert. :(

I never would have guessed that William actually planned for Gabe to end up with him night after night. I just thought that he put up with it, but I'm rather liking how he had these little scheme. I love his character so far; it's so different than any other William I've ever read. He's not a cowardly, submissive person; he's nearly the exact opposite but at the same time, he seems like a very good friend to Gabe.

Drunk Gabe is so adorable; that little bit about his wedding with Will was nearly enough to send me into hysterics. He rather reminds me of some of my cousins when they're wasted, so it only makes me smile that much bigger.

That was really a very cute chapter; it gave us some cute introduction into William's character, without overwhelming us with a lot of details. I'm very looking forward to the next chapter, to see how this little "sleepover" works out.
:)

this is really good