You Can't Save Her - Comments

your story impresses me. ferrure. i would write more but im too tired. good chapter babe!!

I want Harry castrated, burnt severely, shot, cut, sliced and raped by Matt Shadows. xD

AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TEMPERANCE DIDNT GET FREE FROM THAT HARRY GUY!!!!!!!AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! I seriosly started to cry becuase I was hoping so hard that temerance would get free!!!! But either way chapter 8 wa fxxing amazing!!!!

Holy.....shit. 0.0 Wow.

So like...I'd feel weird to say this is a great story, since it's an alternate reality...but it is? Like, yeah gah, I can't even explian it! You're a amazing writer, love. keep it up.

and update soon.

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awwwww....Austin and Temrorance are engaged.........I was laughing and crying through chapter 7...and i swear if you stop short i will punch you in your shirt...love yah sis=D

awwwww....Austin and Temrorance are engaged.........I was laughing and crying through chapter 7...and i swear if you stop short i will punch you in your shirt...love yah sis=D

HOLY SHIRT!!!! (yes, shirt,lol)
A thirs star!!!!!! ;) :D this story is a SUCCESS as i told you it would be! ^u^ SEE!!! you are a great writer!!! i can't belive you say you suck, when acutally, you have TALTENT!!!! ;)

"say feeling tears surfacing themselves" that is a beautiful sentence!!

OH MY HOLY SKITTLES!!! TEMPORANCE IS GOING TO GET MARRIED!!!?
OMFGee!!!! YOU GOT A JOB!!!!?!!! THAT IS AWESOME!!!!

i will stick to this story to the end! Don't worry a bit! *u* my eyes get stars when i read this story of your's...its so beautiful!!!
Update when you can!!! I will be :file: very happily!! :D

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So, ahem. Trinity should be part of the bridal party. :]
Haha! Loving the 'story' babe.

ohmygod. i actually started crying while reading this.

<3

OH my god! I love the metaphor you created of "I hear her mattress tell me that she was sitting on her bed." Its very creative metaphore!!! I kiss it and you for creating it!
and WOW. Triniy really cares for Temporance...
Therapy sucks. It may relieve you of some deep feelings if they coraporate with you at every moment your saying them what you feel, but its annoying and its makes no difference, really.
OMG. I like that song from Weezer, "Pork and Beans", heehee... :D
"I nodded as if she could see me,".... ::lmfao damn that was funny!!!
Oh my god! Have you ever walked in your P.J.s after midnight around your nieghborhood!?!? Its awesome!! I did that a couple times and it feels better!!
Hmm... to answer Temporance's question(s), i think her friends might think of her goin g through rough times and would be concerend.
*GASP!* Austin. what would happen to him if Temporance ends her life!??!
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Damn! I love this story! You really have the skill, dude, you really do!!
update woman, please! i want to find out what happens with Temporance and Austin!!! ;) I will be :file: for more!!!

"Temperance, your a fucking idiot!" I hear a quiver in her voice when she said that. "Look, there must of been a part of you that didn't want to die, why else would you have called me?" "I called four other people too." I say looking back at her, the screen saying that I won a battle.

"See!" Trinity says looking at me from behind her notebook. "But still." I say turning back around. "Temperance, I thought you was finally better, I mean after all the therapy you went through."

That's totally something I would say!

Good chapter babe. Though, you left on a cliffhanger!? Augh!! You're going to be the end of me babe! haha.

Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
Go Trinity!!
Update soon babe!

DAMN! Trinity is a hero!!

she saved temporance once again from suicide and also being at her house that night!! Will she stay at her house (Trinitiy's house) for the next night? I am dieing for more!!!! PLEASE POST CHAPTER 6 PLEASE!!! you always leave me droolong for more!!!lol, but i'm serious!

Another chapter well done! And it didn't seem like you had writer's block at all! AMAZING :shock: It all went smooth-ly ;)

Can't wait for the next update, YAY!!

Sounds great love!!
Can't wait for chapter 5.

:shock: *GASP!*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If she kills herself, then what happens to the story!!!!!????? How would Austin feel!!!!????
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! That stupid Harry ruined her life!!!!! He's a Stupid MF!!!!! :evil:

I love this story!! It builds a lot of emotion and power to drool for more...WRITE MORE!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!! ;)

well, you are a natural, as i have mentioned before, but really, take my word for it!!!! ^u^

OMG!!!!! I WAS SHAKING WHILE READING CHAPTER 4!!!!!!!!!! thats how good you are!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

new chapter is rocking awesomeo ^.^

Ooh! Ten comments and barley on the 3rd chapter! THAT"S SUPER AWESOME-NESS-LY WICKED COOL!!!!!!!!
You know, your a natural at writing! As well as photography!! They're both an art, so your obviously great at both!!! :D :D

I love the way you wrote "wrapping his arms around me, making a invisible wall of comfort." Its a very creative sentence with a lot of unique-ness!!! Whoo-Hoo!!!

And i have something to say about Temporance: HOW CAN SHE POSSABLY KEEP IT A SECRET!!! It'll only complicate her life that way, that's my opinion.

GREAT STORY!!! THERE IS NO SUCH SMILEY FIGURE IN THIS WORLD TO SHOW YOU HOW MUCH I AM PROUD OD YOUR NATURAL WRITING SKILLS!!!!! This smiley :D , yeah, that one is nothing!!!!! Its fifty times more than that!!!!! I am serious!! :D

when's chapter 4 up?? it better be soon!! :twisted: or i will haunt you!!! MUAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!

See babe! You're way a better writer then me and I've been writing for what? five years? Psht.

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