September 9th, 2008 at 04:08pm
SQUEE!
Sorry, I needed to get that out of the way. Oh my gosh, they sound like..the most perfet gatmo couple..ever. Despite the fact they are, but regardless.
But can i just say, I simply ADORED the style you wrote it in. How you just used one word sentences and such. It was just...competely perfect to the story line. It fitted together like Brendon and Ryan (oh, I am a hopless romantic).
I think this story was best at being a drabble, beucas,e it was short and sweet. Literally, and it suited it, a lot. It's like...it's so precious, it's just...fragile, but amazing.
Oh, wow. You...owned this. Completely.
and the sheer simplicity blew me away.
i was honestly touched in the understated beauty of this.
you, my dear, just gave me back my writing.
thank you.