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  • your own loV.E.

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    I love this soooo much!
    October 27th, 2008 at 03:58am
  • The Brightside

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    I finished Breaking Dawn, right, which was to me a bit of a disappointment.

    I seriously think Meyer should buy this off you and publish it as the real fourth book.

    Great job, as always!
    August 16th, 2008 at 01:17am
  • my hearts broken

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    I LOVE THIS SO DAMN MUCH I SWEAR ITS LIKE AN ADDICTION!!!
    It's never too over the edge into details but not lacking them either.
    It is simply perfect, love. I think Stephanie would be proud.
    August 12th, 2008 at 09:04am
  • your own loV.E.

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    The chapters a agonizingly long, but I can't pull myself away.
    I think you captured everything that Stephanie would be proud of in this story, and I'm grateful that you wrote every chapter just how you did.
    This might havejust been the most well written story, other than the originals and compared to anything else I've ever red, that I'd ever laid my eyes on.
    Thank you for writting!
    August 4th, 2008 at 08:23pm
  • my hearts broken

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    Gollies it just gets better and better. Good job :)
    August 4th, 2008 at 07:33am
  • my hearts broken

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    Marvolous Job :)
    August 2nd, 2008 at 08:16am
  • The Brightside

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    Sorry I suck so bad at commenting. >_>

    The last few updates I caught up on were amazing. Brilliant. Perfect. My eyes couldn't be dragged away from the page.

    Your writing style is magnificent - not over the top, and definitely not insufficient. It's just right. A lot of people make the mistake of overwriting their stories, loading it with description, telling and not showing - but not you.

    Keep up the excellent work. (:
    August 1st, 2008 at 04:46pm
  • pastulio

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    i absolutly love this story.
    its written very well.
    July 31st, 2008 at 11:35pm
  • pastulio

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    i absolutly love this story.
    its written very well.
    July 31st, 2008 at 11:31pm
  • kibbles.'n.bits

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    this is REALLY good.
    i love the writing style..!
    July 31st, 2008 at 10:02pm
  • kibbles.'n.bits

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    this is REALLY good.
    i love the writing style..!
    July 31st, 2008 at 10:02pm
  • my hearts broken

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    WOW!! :)
    July 31st, 2008 at 08:38am
  • Kat.

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    Its getting exciting =D
    July 30th, 2008 at 03:54am
  • my hearts broken

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    good good job :)
    July 30th, 2008 at 02:27am
  • Kat.

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    Absoloutely loved it. =)
    July 28th, 2008 at 08:43pm
  • codenamePIM

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    I'm positive there are some moors in Scotland dear. Positivee.

    Thanks everyone, you guys are fantastic!
    July 28th, 2008 at 05:51pm
  • leahminor

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    you do know the moors aren't anywhere near scottland right ?
    but its still amazing
    July 28th, 2008 at 03:48pm
  • Kat.

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    your writing style is similar to stephanie meyers.
    its pretty amazing.
    i havent read any other fan-fics like this.
    update soon!
    July 27th, 2008 at 09:04am
  • my hearts broken

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    i rather liked this one...
    July 27th, 2008 at 07:04am
  • supergluethequeen

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    wowww.
    i thought i was reading stephenie meyers work.
    That was intenseee, and I don't know which direction it will go in- amazingggg!
    July 25th, 2008 at 05:06am