I LOVE THIS SO DAMN MUCH I SWEAR ITS LIKE AN ADDICTION!!! It's never too over the edge into details but not lacking them either. It is simply perfect, love. I think Stephanie would be proud.
The chapters a agonizingly long, but I can't pull myself away. I think you captured everything that Stephanie would be proud of in this story, and I'm grateful that you wrote every chapter just how you did. This might havejust been the most well written story, other than the originals and compared to anything else I've ever red, that I'd ever laid my eyes on. Thank you for writting!
The last few updates I caught up on were amazing. Brilliant. Perfect. My eyes couldn't be dragged away from the page.
Your writing style is magnificent - not over the top, and definitely not insufficient. It's just right. A lot of people make the mistake of overwriting their stories, loading it with description, telling and not showing - but not you.