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  • ARGHHHHH!

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    Daaaaang. She needs to come back. Hah. (: This story makes me smile.

    But DAMN THE NAME JOE! :P Frkn. Ugh.

    Update again whenever you can (:
    December 18th, 2008 at 06:11am
  • cynicalqueen

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    I just love the realism of the story and how descriptive you are. The update was incredible as always, it makes you wonder and fear for Evangeline. It also makes you feel sorry for Paul. So, yeah... loved it.
    December 17th, 2008 at 05:45pm
  • SEX! on toast.

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    i'm a new reader.

    and i read you story in like a few hours. AND I TOTALLY FELL IN LOVE WITH IT!
    your writing style is totally amazing. one of the best. :)
    and i can't belive it's already ENDING! i'll tear up horribly. i almost teared up. at one part and i felt this funny feeling in my tummy.
    okay, i don't know why i said that but i hope you get to update soon. :)

    thanks, okay that was uber long. Taaaaaa. :)
    December 17th, 2008 at 04:31pm
  • Batman Loves Me

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    i can't believe this story's going to end soon! i love it =]
    December 17th, 2008 at 12:20pm
  • Q....

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    This story is truly amazing. It's mindblowing how well you've seem to capture the aspects of anorexia, and throwing Paul DiGiovanni on top of that is just awesome :)
    December 17th, 2008 at 08:56am
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    Paul is so sigh-worthy. Sadly he fell for the wrong girl. I want to hug Paul, now! (Well... that would at least give me an excuse to hug Paul.)
    Although I love Evan, the way you described her when she was leaving Paul's (that cold look in her eye and such) made some disgust for her surface. Bitch alert.
    December 17th, 2008 at 08:09am
  • Ashlee Simpson

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    Woah I've missed loads! I've had to do major catch up reading.
    This is one of these stories that I can't wait to read an update of. You are such a fantastic writer. You describe everything so well, from her illness to all the emotions that the characters feel. I'll be sad when this is over, I really will be, but keep on gracing us with your writing!
    December 17th, 2008 at 07:41am
  • bitterxperfume

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    I really really want to know what happens.OH! And I love your descriptions of Paul. I had never thought he was attractive before this story.
    Good job!
    December 17th, 2008 at 07:24am
  • bitterxperfume

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    I read some of this on quizilla a while back but I really got into it just now! It is amazing and the characters are really believable! Good job
    December 10th, 2008 at 06:08pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    Oh wow... I just finally got caught up since when I left this story to study for midterms and wow... I'm blown away by how much Evangeline's character has grown. It was really realistic how you described her slowly recovering only to relapse. I admire the amount of detail you put into every single chapter... it's just wow.
    December 9th, 2008 at 04:20am
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    She broke- she might have not snapped in half like expectd, but she snapped.
    As you know, I really love this story. I'm almost at a loss of words.
    December 7th, 2008 at 09:36am
  • Batman Loves Me

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    such a wonderful story, and it gets better with every update. i can't believe how connected you make me feel to the characters!
    more soon please!
    December 6th, 2008 at 01:16pm
  • Homicidal Panda

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    I love this story
    It is so amazing
    December 6th, 2008 at 12:32am
  • beckystarz

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    no.no.no!

    she can't relapse. I repeat: SHE CANNOT
    December 5th, 2008 at 05:36am
  • blu.

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    oh gosh,there's so much that I must say for this story...but I won't bore you with that. Though, I must say, thank you. Thank you so much for writing this story in the first place, thank you for giving me the chance to read this beautiful story of yours. Once I read the intro and first chapter, I knew right away that I wouldn't leave this computer till I finished reading. And that's exactly what I did. I couldn't stop at all. your story just captured me. I felt myself laughing at some of the things you wrote, I found myself wipping the tears that came from my eyes. I found myself smiling non stop when Evan first kissed Paul. I found my stomach forming it's own little butterflies. I just fell in love with your story, and I really can't wait for the next chapter.
    UPDATE SOON!!
    December 5th, 2008 at 04:55am
  • ARGHHHHH!

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    Damnit. WHY WOULD YOU GO BACK?!

    Anyways, that was good. (: Update again! haha.
    December 5th, 2008 at 04:27am
  • RAWRitslainey

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    gasp. quizilla readers doing better than us? no!
    this was amazinggg. i want to see what happens next right now!
    December 5th, 2008 at 01:54am
  • Paranomasia

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    Wow. This story is just so absolutely riveting. It's the best one I've read in a long time. Your plot is just so well developed and the characters are like real people... Just wow.
    December 5th, 2008 at 12:38am
  • jirrithxx419

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    so, I just read all 28 chapters, and I have to say that you have an amazing skill as a writer. I can't wait to read more :D
    December 4th, 2008 at 08:21pm
  • kailixx

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    oh no she can't start again :[
    December 4th, 2008 at 07:13pm