The Fall - Comments

Oh, the irony.
I love Winona.
I love this story.
Keep it up.

this is really interesting...
i want to know what's up
with winona...

Wow.
This is great.
It's very different.
I'm interested to see how this goes.

Dude, this is frickin awesome.. I wanna be a dictator. I'll rule the US. They'll love me. You know it, bro. Well.... you're not a guy, sorry. -.- I talk like a guy a lot. I like your plaid background. It's nifty. And Nirvana-ish... In school, I thought that people still hadn't gotten out of the bermuda triangle alive yet, so I created this place called Nirvania. It was great, I drew this flag, and wrote down all their customs and that crap, it was great. Well.. yeah. The connection I was trying to make was that I created an island too.... I just didn't create people for it. Or a story for that matter.... Anywho, keep up the good work! Your stories rule!

Charlie is sexy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well, you dont like to disappoint do u? all of ur stories are awesome!

this ones got potential.

I've read the 1st chapter a few weeks ago, but i didn't have time to mark my territory at the time. I like it from what i've read so far.

amazing plotline

Geez suspense.

Holy shit! Winona needs to speak up and tell Michael and Charlie!
I wonder exactly who her father is...

Ok, now you've really got me tripping out about Winona...
And I can't help but wonder if either Michael or Charlie are gay...
Update please! The suspense is killing me...

Wow, this one is great too! I was starting to like it after the first couple of chapters, but Winona just pulled me in.
I can't wait for more!

I like it.

~Layla