Happy Trail - Comments

@ i r i s;
Thank you!!! I am just now coming back to mibba, forgive my super late reply :)

@ Mike Wazowski
I thank you so very much!!!! I wrote this... Nearly five years ago. I reread all of these oneshots (because this is the first in a string of many!!!) just a few days ago and it made me miss writing these boys more than anything. I just started a new story and I'm in the beginning stages of it- it's crazy, I haven't posted anything new in almost five years (writer's block and life kinda got in the way of everything) and now, I think maybe its because I miss MCR so much, I feel that I need this part of my life back. I miss them way too much!!

I'm in love with your writing style. ♥

This. Was. Amazing. <3

Oh my. This was quite incredible. :yah

I like how it was sexy and sweet at the same time. And how Frank and Gerard interacted with each other so well and eveything, it was just perfect.

The whole rose petals thing can be slightly overused sometimes, but didn't make it seem cliche or anything. It was just wonderful. And the tie, it made me smile.

Bless Frank at the begining, of course Gerard wouldn't forget, or not want to do anything, whatever it was he thought had happened, psht... and I can totally imagine Gerard waiting to know Frank was on his way, then flailing round to light candles and strip in a rushed and adorable manner.

The sex was hot too. Haha. I like how you added the nervousness and unsureness on Gerard's part, about what he was doing. It made it very like their first time with each other and the waiting will make it better thing... yuh... twas gooood.

The mixed tape, rather than a CD, was adorable too. How it takes more effort, just aww!!

And... yeah, your characters just interacted so well and it was smutty and sweet and just pwnsme.

Brilliant job : )

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But I do! I do have something important to add! :) I have to add that you, Lizzy, never cease to amaze me as a writer. You're my very favorite writer of fluffy, happy stories (and that is in every way a compliment and in no way an insult). And I've always enjoyed your boysex. But this...

this...

Wow.

Completely underwhelming word, I know. But then that's why you're the writer and I'm just the commenter, LoL. :P

The sex was amazing -- well-written, well-crafted, and utterly palpable. But you add in the love, the romanticism, the little things like making a mix-tape and lighting candles, that just take it a step beyond.

I love the "hidden message," that good things are worth the wait and that waiting can make everything better. It adds a dimension to the relationship as well as to the story. It shows that their bond is truly one of love and not simply one of lust.

So I know that I'm coming to the party very, very late. But I hope you'll forgive me and remember that it's better late than never. :)

wow that was beautifully written

that was absolutely breath taking. i adored it! i was like, i missed something?! ha...and the mixed tape made my day, that's always been something i've wanted from someone...a tape, not a cd...that was amazing. now i'm off to catchup where i left off on the latest installment.

Best sex ever...

The first part was drool-worthy... The dirty talk and the sweet talk all mixed in to one beautiful smut-tastic read.

The second part, out in the living room, was cute also. I love that song. I have since, like, i dunno, it CAME OUT. Haha. Go Lifehouse. The sex in the chair was kind of confusing cause for a minute I didn't realize that Frank was actually riding him yet. It said he 'settled' on him or whatever, but I didn't realize it meant that they were ready to roll, you know? Ok, yeah, so Canadians are a little slower...

Over all, this was fucking fuck-tastic. And I'm going to get banned. I can see it coming... <3

-K

I kinda feel like it doesn't need a fourth chapter.
It has a prefect ending already xD

This is an amazing story xD
xD

I love it.

edit: page claim! Um... his name shall forever be... Fezz. xD

DAMN THAT WAS FUCKING SEXY!!!! I read it two times in a row!!!!

...................................(checks pants again).....................yep creamed once more!

Brava!!! i bow at your feet for writting one of the sexiest Ferards ever!!!!!!

Peace, Love, and Chemicals!
xoxo
Sweeney Way

I fu**in' loved this!

It was sooo hawt!

:XD

Ah, I can't believe this is already over! I remember when you first told me about it; I thought I was going to freak out, I was so excited. And that feeling hasn't changed; I love this mini series as much now as I did at the beginning, or maybe even more. With only three chapters, you managed to set up such a romantic, sexy tale, even better than some others who have stories with thirty or fifty chapters.

I'm so glad you started this chapter off with last one's last line; that is just so simple, yet so sexy at the same time. It sent chills down my spine reading it so it's definitly appropriate that Gerard would get them too.

I love how you managed to combine so many different moods into this one chapter without it seeming weird or anything like that. You had those little humerous moments in there that tied directly into the sexiness... and then there was just the pure romanticism... which nearly made my heart melt. It never ceases to amaze me how you're so good at writing the cutest scenes possible. That mixed tape moment was just beautiful... and having Hanging By a Moment in there? Gorgeous.

ily. <3

*cough* Okay, well I came back becasue I realized that I forgot to comment! Well not only forgot but I fell asleep last night after reading it becasue of my untimely sickness.

Anyways. I think I want to point out one thing that just seemed to make things worth while. Not that I found this unentertaining, on the contrary, I sometimes just love to cuddle up and read smut filled stories! but lately I have had the taste for deeper meaning. And I absolutly adore how you were able to incorpurate both.

"I figured, anyone can copy songs over and make a CD, that takes no effort at all these days,” he elaborated, smiling as Frank continued to stare up at him with stars in his eyes. “But it takes effort to make someone a mixed tape, you have to plan it out and put love into making it perfect.”

I was planning on making a mix CD for my best friend who was moving 5 hours away. However after reading this I decided that a mix CD would not do it, but then I relalized later on that night when she called me that she didn't deserve either.

Yet the thought of making a mix tape has been a mind set of mine; something I want to do for someone special to me.

Great job, on everything and I applaude your amazing ability to write so well and be able to appeal to so many readers like myself.

Awesome update!

"No need to do this baby, the sex drives me crazy."

I wonder why my favourite lyric comes to mind after I finish reading that chapter!

Ahhh pure sex! That was so delicious, and it was also mixed with being just completely adoraaaable. There were so many amazing moments in that chapter, all evoking different reactions and emotions from your reader.

I really liked how it started off so hot. It was really sexy and also have Gerard just seems to be completely at Frank's mercy. Frank is being all controlling and just so sexy! God I want to be Gerard in that scene.

Okay one of the things I realized I loved in this, was Frank. You know how I am ALWAYS a Gerard girl? He always owns me in your stories, but this time it was all about Frank for me. I think he just had so much personality and he was cheeky and cute and thats how I always see Frank as! I really, really liked this Frank. He was even more awesome then Gerard, and as you know, that is saying a LOT.

I thought it was hilarious that they broke the bed! I actually laughed out loud. I love when their sex is just crazy. It was a really funny moment and also...it kind of "broke the ice," so to speak.

And then I loved how they had that special moment, where Gerard had made that mix tape for Frank. It was soo sweet, and you were right, it was so much better not being just all smut. I like that it wasnt purely physical, but just so much more too. I actually did not press the song, because as you know, I cannot read and listen to a song at the same time! I find myself unable to attend to both signals at the same time!

Gerard is also so super cute. Even though I liked Frank the best, I still LOVED Gerard. I always love him.

It was soo cool how it all just became reaaally sexy again! I loved the image of Frank crawling over to Gerard and just being so dominant and sudden. It was awesome. I can just imagine how suprised Gerard was.

God now I really want to write a frerard one shot. I miss doing those so much.

You know what I really want RIGHT NOW? A kiss. I think more also. I hate it and love it how your stories can do that to me!! Lizzzzzzzzzzzy!!

I adored this, from start to finish. It was so amazing. I love how it was happy, funny, sexy and adorable all at the same time.

Stunning.

-dies and goes to heaven-
I adored that so, so much. It was so hot... yet you managed to make it one of the sweetest chapters I have ever read. Ever. The song really set it off, and made it extra special

:arms:

AWWW.
That was adorable =]

Aww, that was so cute and sweet, and sexy :yah :D

And the song was beautiful

WAHOO FRERARD SEX IS THE BEST.
And I never knew that there was such thing as a happy trail...
But I am VERY happy this is how I found out :-D
BUTBUTBUT WHY YOU LEAVE IT THERE?? IT WAS SO HAWT.
I guess this is a sign that I need to stop reading perverted *AND AMAZING* Frerard stories and get on with my art homework. Gahh.