Happy Trail - Comments

Yay!!! that was romantically and erotic ending. .That was delicious. .Wowowee. .
You really did a great job on this birthday surprise for frankie. .having a naked gee on the bed, a trail of roses, the candlelights. .well the two sexiest man alive. .there's nothing i could ask for. .you got it all. .My butterflies always fly whenever i read your stories and this one is no exception.. You are absolutely great. .love this!!

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thats all that comes to mind. i love you; you are so talented. never EVER think your not.

That chapter was so amazing.

I went up and clicked the music player and scrolled back down to read, and I could just picture Gerard and Frankie, dancing around. :cute: The timing with the lyrics was perfect too. I almost cried :shifty

Anyway! That was an amazing story! Great job. :tehe:

Oh wow, that was an amazing chapter Lizzy. The emotions described, and how wonderfully it was written truly making an amazing last chapter for the best three-shot in the world. =]

You know I've been eagerly anticipating you updating this and I'm not disappointed at all with it; I don't even think I would've been disappointed if you had left out sex in this chapter, I love it that much. Although; I do love reading your sex scenes and they make me giggle.

Gosh; I loved this. =] And I love you.

C

that was hot

I have decided to comment again, because I just re-read it and I love it enough to comment twice.

I love you Lizzy.

*takes deep breath*
Oh my fuck. I seriously cannot believe you cut me off like that. That's like if I was 21 and went to a bar and then the bartender didn't like me and decided he didn't want to mix my drinks.

I think that even though it's just a three-shot, it's probably one of the most amazing Frerard's I've ever read. The detail in it is amazing, and the way that Gerard planned his and Frank's first time was so romantic!

"Just wait 'til you see what else I have in store for you..."

^^Probably one of the best lines ever, and there were a few more that I loved. Which I shall proceed to list off;

''Just shut up and let me drive you crazy.''
Tell him what to do Gerard!

"Yes, Gerard. I don't know about that perfection part, but I am all yours."
I'm taking it that Frank's never had sex with a guy before right?

"I don't want you to finish just yet. That was nothing compared to what I have in store for you next..."
Kinky!

"Baby, I'm gonna ride you like there ain't no tomorrow..."
Again, Kinky!

"Because I can go all night if you want me too..."
He can? He can last all night with someone as hot as Gerard riding him?

Anyways; those were my favorite lines; because most of them made me giggle hysterically and/or 'aww'. I'm so lucky that I'm up by myself or I probably would have gotten sent to a mental asylum. I really can't wait for the next chapter, it's gonna be so amazing, I can just tell. :D

C

My birthday's on Halloween, too!
Do I get some Frankieness?

I'm amazed at all the effort and planning Gerard put into this... it's breathtaking.
True romance like that is so rare these days... romance where someone WANTS to put that much time into planning.
You're amazing at fluff.
And in my opinion, smut mixes so well together with fluff.
It's intense, and you have a way of continuously increasing that.

The way Gerard wants to please Frankie and is willing to sacrifice his comfort or go to any length (no pun intended :shifty) to accomplish that is so sweet.

The second installment is perfect.
I can't get over how satifying it is.
Except that they didn't ORGASM.
It's like you have me teetering on the edge as well.

Your descriptions are so incricate.
They paint the perfect picture.
The way Gerard begged Frank for it not to end was amazing.
It makes me want to drool.
You ended it perfectly.
Perfect, perfect, perfect.

I can't wait for more.

I lurve it!
please update soon!!

you see my avatar?
thats what your doing to me!

xox ily

oh plaese dont make me beg lizz.
i swear to god.
i neeeed this to be updated. okay.
i will die if you dont xD
bahahaha
okay maybe i wont die per say. but ill come close to it.

ily oxo

nice ........... very .... nice !

:yah :yah

holy.. wow.
i love how you write their 'emotions' into the story, in a way.
another chapter?!
YESPLEASE.

It's times like this where I realise just how much I love frerard. You couldn't have written that any better if you tried. Seriously. Okay, I wish you'd hurry up and update now, because I need to finish my orgasm. :file:
: D
Thank you!
xoxo

very nice..another chapter would be great =]

......................(checks pants)...................yep there creamed.

Lol! Wow............that was fucking SEXYLYHOTBITCH!!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAHHHH!!!!!

I can't wait for more!!

Peace, Love, and Chemicals!!
xoxo
Sweeney Way

hot damn thats kinky

[Insert stream of words children shouldn't be exposed to]
That. Was. Insane!
Serious, that was so well written and just showed so much love at the same time.
I salute you!!:)

oh god,

that couldnt have gotten,

ANY HOTTER!

more very soon...
xo

Oh my lord. That was... wow.

First off, this really proves just how big a difference italics can make. You picked the absolute right spots to put them and it just really made ordinary words stand out so much.

You did such an amazing job with this Lizzy. A lot of people, when they try to write somebodies first time and it's supposed to be special, one of the best moments of their lives. But then the author ruins it by making it far too smutty and lustful with not enough of love. You struck the perfect balance; it had that perfectly sexy element but there was so much love behind all of Frank and Gerard's actions the entire time.

And when I say sexy, I mean sexy because... whoa. You really played up the foreplay element well, just like you said you would. Not only that, but it didn't seem like you were overwhelming it with too much, y'know? It was just perfect with the amount of detail you had and everything.

And now you're having another chapter!
*pounces*

I love you, y'know that?
:arms: