Happy Trail - Comments

YES!
More!
Please!
*looks cute*
:cute:

*waits for breathing to slow down*
...
*waits some more*
f..fuckingg hell.
that was beautiful and wonderfully written and so fucking hot.
*licks lips in anticipation for the next chapter*

ANOTHER CHAPTER?!?! :O
Lizzy, I love you! :arms:

:oops:
umm so, yeah.. Nice chapter :D It was very.. exciting :yah

-drool- Holy hell. Never have i read boysex that oustanding; and it's not even over with! My god woman... how can one person contain so much skill?

Don't be greedy! Pass some of it on! xD

yeah u should totally add another chapter this is so hot and amazing!

yes!!! add a chapter!!!!
well written!

-twitches-
let me go and get a new pair of pants... haha!
i loved the update :D

:yah

Holy crap, dude! This makes me happy...in my pants.

Ha.

You Sexy Bitch!

Haha... Well! You def. succeeded in making this quite a chapter. Never doubt your smut skills again, dude!

*takes a deep breath and wipes invisible sweat off of forehead*

I'm going to take a little breather now... :)

:yah
Oooh... my... JEEBUS.
That was so hot!
You're amazing at writing sex scenes.. never ever stop, ever.
But even while it was hot, it was also incredibly sweet
It's so perfect!
I'm holding my breath till the next chapter..
...which means you should update soon, or I might just die :XD

:arms:

xoxoxx

Wow..
That was really hot..
Haha more soon?

I'M ordering you to update on top of the world
or else i will not hesitate to form a mob.
Much love
<3

SEX.

Literally.

I was actually giggling all the way through that like a little school girl.I don't know why, I think it might possibly be a side effect of being sick. My head has pretty much stopped working.

I can't beleive you are doing another one, those boys have got some impressive stamina! Where is it going to go now! Chloe doesn't know, she hopes Lizzy does.

My favourite line, out of all of them, was this: "As Frank looked into Gerard's eyes, he knew at that moment that he had found everything that he had ever been looking for."
So pretty. It sounds like such a moment of realization for Frankie. I loved, loved, loved that line. It was sooo cute, and sweet and special.

They were in love. Awe. And it was obvious.

I don't know HOW you managed to write that last part, the mental images were fast and detailed. I could barely read it, I don't know how you wrote it! It was very hot though.

You have done Frank and Gerard sex proud, I am sure they themselves could tell you that that is exactly what it is really like. Reow.

You left it there?????
You're so mean!!
That is not a good place to leave off....

Cause I want more xD
More soon?

aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh update!!!!

O_____O
update

YOU LIZZY ARE AN EVIL PERSON!
Gah you better update soon!

OMG! I'm in love with the meentaal pictures
I think we all agree- THAT IS HOT!!!!!! :mrgreen:

Update soon, pleezes?

wow.. :yah
That was so good.. I've got pretty images in my head now.. :tehe:
I love how Gerard decorated the apartment! It's very romantic and fluffy and at the same time it's incredibly sexy. And he put so much effort into it and the rose and the letter and.. yeah everything..
I'm such a sucker for romance >.<

anywho, I hope you will post part 2 soon! :arms:

Awr... yum :yah
That was written really, really well - I could practically see it happening in my head =)
*brain orgasms*

aHEM, anyway...
I loved it so much! The way Frank was all depressed about spening his birthday alone, made it all the more special when he walked into the apartment and saw all the candles and petals.
And the way you described how much effort Gerard had put into it all was just... Wowww.
Next chapter soon pwease!

xoxoxoxox :arms:

lol i always love seeing Frankies happy trail its awsome lol!

this is so awsome and sexy! ahh u need to update lol