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  • SynysterLys

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    Will there be a sequel? I think you've left room for one. If not, the ending was fantastic, like a good story should be- it makes you think, consider the options, is satisfying, and even a little sad. thanks for writing it.
    November 22nd, 2010 at 12:50am
  • SynysterLys

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    This was MUCH different than the other stories, and I loved it! You've succeeded in prolonging my homework, but, its all good. Anyway, Great job on the story, loved it to death, and all of the characters. Especially the joker. he stayed true, here.
    November 22nd, 2010 at 12:49am
  • Mymockingbird

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    HOLY FUCK. That was....i don't even have a word. I want someone to make up a word for what that was. I found your story last night and have spent the whole day reading it. You're an excellent author and your word usage is exceptional. You portrayed the Joker's insanity (and EXTREME bipolarness) very very very well. I could picture Heath Ledger saying it. My few constructive points though: even though the joker is obviously a psychotic crazy man ther was a liiiittle too much violence (as in him beating people) for me though that could just be my taste, and is it just me or was Shane always crying or passing out? All in all it blew my mind and the ending was spectacular. Im sorry there's no sequel :( i loved it.....and if you for some reson would want to read MY story and add some feedback it would be HIGHLY appreciated....though im sure you already knew that :)
    September 7th, 2009 at 09:53pm
  • beingqueenelizabeth

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    I'm on chapter 20 and I hardly tear myself away. It's fantastic!

    I can't wait to get to sequel. :D
    December 27th, 2008 at 08:19am
  • xTearsxOfxCrimsonx

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    I LOVE the way you gave the Joker a...............charming instability........within your story.It was a lot different than other Joker stories that I have read and had great originality. ^_^
    November 26th, 2008 at 11:12pm
  • The Scoundrel

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    So I am going to be totally and completely honest with you. I read the first chapter of this story when you first posted it, and I hated it. And I went on with my life and read other stories, until yours reached 4 stars, then I decided to give it another go.

    It was the best choice I ever made. My only regret is that I was too fucking lazy to leave a comment. So let me take this time to make it up to you.

    The voice you write in is mesmerizing. I literally felt like Shane Fatello took my hand and led me through those six months of her life, all the way up to the point where she snapped. The details you wove in were very intricate, but not over-powering. I felt like something was accomplished every time you updated. And the way you developed the characters, over time, almost every one of them evolved in some way, and I became attached to all of them. It was incredible to witness the way you cultivated their existence, almost as if you had known them in real life. That leads me to dialogue, which is a very hard skill to master, but my god did you ever master it completely. Never once (save the first chapter) did I ever scoff at anything your characters said.

    The Joker. I have seen utter failure when it comes to portraying his character. I've attempted to write numerous Joker stories, and I felt that my own work comes up short. But you, you my friend, he flowed out of you. I can't phrase it any other way. You took him completely away from the movie-dialogue, almost goofy at times stereotype, and made him something different, something original. You made him into something real.

    Now, do I want a sequel? Of course. I'm an American, and we don't believe you can ever have too much of a good thing.

    But I am also a writer. I only want a sequel if you feel like you need one.

    Good luck and best of wishes. You have a career in this kid.
    November 11th, 2008 at 09:11am
  • fen'harel

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    o.o
    Holly effin cow!
    noo!
    it can't be over!
    It can't!!!!!!!
    u.u
    I loved every single detail of it!
    Her insanity and how you made her come to life n_n
    I really hope to read more from you
    November 10th, 2008 at 09:58pm
  • SynOfLife

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    Se-fuckign-QUEL PLEASE!!!

    For the love of all that is insanity, PLEASE DO A SEQUEL!!!

    I LOVED IT I LOVED EET I DID I DID I DID!!
    November 10th, 2008 at 04:19pm
  • Kassaunders

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    no matter how confused i may be at this point
    (and trust me, I'm confused)
    I still thought it was excellent!
    Like everyone else says, a sequel is DEFINATLY wanted!
    I still don't know if it was all part of her thoughts or if The Joker and everyone else was real. I hope they were, but something tells me they weren't, but i dont know. Which is why i want a sequel.

    Nevertheless....

    I LOVED IT.
    November 8th, 2008 at 08:58pm
  • pagupagu

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    OH MY GOD! SHE SNAPPED AND IT WAS ABOSLUTELY AMAZING!

    You have to do a sequel! You can't just leave all us readers with that. Brilliant story but there needs to be another one! I won't except that they're not real, they so are!

    SEQUEL! :)

    xoxo
    November 8th, 2008 at 07:48pm
  • JENNandBLITZ

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    new reader!! *points at self" I read ths after someone reccomended it to me, and all in one day, and WOW i love it.
    wow.
    sequel? please god say there's a sequel?!
    xx
    November 8th, 2008 at 04:48pm
  • SorrysNotGoodEnough

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    That last chapter was amazing. I love the whole thing straight from the beginning, but that last chapter...... Woah =]

    Congrats. Your Joker story is the best one ever written.

    You should definitly make a sequeal.
    November 8th, 2008 at 01:01am
  • bamftastic;

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    I vote sequel like everyone else!
    Omfg , that was amazing.
    As soon as they ignored her idea of being with the Joker all that time I was like, "Jesus, they were all in her imagination."
    TOTALLY not expected.

    So pretty much, this is the BEST story (fan-fiction) that I've ever read in my LIFE.
    Thank you!
    :]
    November 7th, 2008 at 10:18pm
  • InsaneEmoCupCake

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    damn this story is amazing i loves it and there shoud definetly be a sequel
    November 7th, 2008 at 09:40pm
  • dacastardust

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    Well fuck me in a bag of chips.
    Sequel?
    I think so.

    As xLoveShot said, I'm really gonna miss this story.
    )':
    November 7th, 2008 at 08:18pm
  • CandyCoatedChocolate

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    Ahh!
    Does this mean a sequel!?
    I hope this means a sequel!
    (Starts chanting)
    Sequel!
    Sequel!
    Sequel!
    November 7th, 2008 at 06:28pm
  • kurdt cobain.

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    *Raises hand*
    I vote sequel.
    :D
    November 7th, 2008 at 05:08pm
  • fireworks

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    xLoveShot:
    I had a sneaky suspicion that The Joker was just a figure of her imagination.
    Now I think different.
    He's reallyyy scary in this story.
    Paha
    More soon, yeah?
    OMG! I KNNNEEWWWW IT!
    Seriously. I'm going to miss this story so much!
    And the ending was so depressingly amazing.
    You should do a new Joker story!
    :D
    *claps*
    November 7th, 2008 at 04:26pm
  • Billie Joe_Malfoy

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    *Sniff sniff* What's that I smell? A sequel, perhaps? Hopefully?... please?
    This story was amazing, not just the plotline and the characters but watching you grow as a writer. That last chapter was bone chilling and had the same effect on me after watching "Fight Club" for the first time. Simply energizing. You have talent, Missy. I pray you'll invest more of it into this delightful plot you've so cleverly created.
    November 7th, 2008 at 09:52am
  • CandyCoatedChocolate

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    Grahh!
    How DARE you leave off at a cliffhanger!
    Here I am, reading this PHENOMINAL story, and 1.) I find out its the SECOND to LAST chapter of the AWESOME story, and 2.) You leave off at a cliffhanger!
    No!
    Hurry up and update, or I'll... take all of your socks. Then your feet will forever be cold.
    No, wait. Don't update... 'cause then it'll be done.
    Yes... update... no, wait, don't...
    GRAHH!
    Kudos, though, for the great story.
    -CCC-
    PS: You should check out my story... only got two chapters up, but its a work in progress. ;D
    PPS: Sorry for the long comment...
    November 4th, 2008 at 11:50pm