Alright Princess, Just What Do You Want? - Comments

  • Kassaunders

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    How lame. I thought it was clear I wasn't being braggadocious. jerk.

    Don't be mean! I have dreams, too, ya know! crackwhore...


    By the way, over six hundred people finished this story. Yeah. That's bragging.
    August 4th, 2010 at 11:19pm
  • Bella Goes Away.

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    767 people have read this story. I don't want to brag, but that means it must be good.

    No it does not. It means that many people have clicked the story. And that line turned me off from even wanting to attempt to read your story. Bragging is a turn off for me.
    August 1st, 2010 at 08:50pm
  • Minuit Ombre

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    This is such a friggen awesome story xD I love it so far and can't wait to start on the sequal. I'm on chapter 41 right now... Oh, I have a question. I don't know if it's typos or what, but is her name Sim or Sin? You put both down when saying who she is... ?_?
    October 27th, 2009 at 11:43pm
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    So, i just read all of this.
    It took me a few days, but i got through it all and i must say, DAMN!
    *flails and dies from heart palpitations*
    I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT ENDING!
    ARGH JOKER!!!! *screams and claws at the air*
    What was he thinking?!
    *headdesk*
    *is obsessed with this story*
    Hahaha, i loved this!
    Every minute of it.
    Even the parts you felt were crap, they were still awesome!
    I. LOVED. THIS!
    *is off to read the sequel*
    GREAT JOB!
    August 29th, 2009 at 03:37pm
  • Evra Von

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    The other commenters are so right, this story is the best joker novel on mibba. Your writing is fantastic and breath-taking in the most admirable way ever, I’ve never read such an exciting plot in my whole life on this damned site. And finally I come across a beloved writer like you, who has changed my view on this site totally. Continue discovering new twists and plots, and develop new magnificent stories as the years continue. I’ll make sure to read each one and comment each update, it would be all my pleasure to do so.
    August 7th, 2009 at 10:40am
  • Snaps_

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    wow i just finished this story and i loved it so much. even if the ending wasnt happy...persay.....but i still loved it. great job. i dont know why i started reading this because i wasnt really into batman.
    but now....
    i have turned full fledge joker fan!
    hehehe
    thanks :)
    July 19th, 2009 at 08:08pm
  • prettyxinxyourxpain

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    i know that this is well over due, but it's mainly because i just found this story. it's taken me a long time to read it, but now that i've finished it i must say i am hooked like a drug addict. i cannot wait for the sequel... the "real" one at least. i will be keeping myself busy reading 'my version of hell was funnier' in the meantime. thank you for unleashing your wonderful creativity.
    January 6th, 2009 at 02:04am
  • echomeheather

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    This is seriously one of the best stories I've ever read.
    Surprisingly, I'm not too angry about the whole Harley thing haha.
    I really think that the ending fit the story.
    I can't wait for the sequal and the short stories =DD!
    You're amazing.
    November 30th, 2008 at 11:03am
  • Dancing Caveman

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    HARLEY? Uh-oh. I can't wait for the sequels and such. LOVED the ending, dear. It's perfect. I mean, sure it makes me mad that he'd do that to Sim, but really- that's how he'd act. (Maybe. I'm not a pro when it comes to determining what a psychopath would act like...)

    I'd love to give you a full story review, but it might take a few days so I can go back and look through the story again. ;)
    November 30th, 2008 at 03:01am
  • fleshyle

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    Completely and totally perfect; if the Joker had done anything else I would've been disappointed in you.
    And while I half hate him for it, oh my god.
    Your writing will always be so...breathtakingly phenominal. I've never read anything better.
    AND AND AND
    I love her name hehe
    Even though he betrayed her.
    I love the Joker too<3
    So much love...where to put it?
    OH I KNOW
    My version of hell was much funnier<33
    November 29th, 2008 at 05:36pm
  • dacastardust

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    oh. my. FUCKING. god.
    this story was fucking INCREDIBLE.
    probably my favourite story on here!

    IHATEHARLEYFORGETTINGINBETWEENTHEM!
    SFGIHSDIGHSD'GSDGH'D;SOGHSADGIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I enjoyed that last chapter so much.
    Simply because you did the.. ehm... scene so well,
    but brought back his personality brilliantly at the end.

    I LOVE YOU.
    no lie.
    i have freakin' love hearts in my eyes right now.
    haha.

    i adore this story.
    really.
    the plot was so original, completely your own.
    i just loved it.
    i've grown to love Sim, too.

    i hope she kicks Harley's sorry arse.
    (:

    CAN'T
    WAIT
    FOR
    SEQUEL!

    xxxxxxxx (:
    November 29th, 2008 at 12:06pm
  • MamiEI4U

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    I love this story! But OO Jeeze I hate Harley! Her accent drives me baty!!! What is SIn to do! Start her own Bad guy time...Which she drives Joker and Batman crazy...Or just go to Batman and Drive the Joker crazy....And I hope Harley dies soon into the story :D
    November 29th, 2008 at 08:04am
  • Draco_Familiar

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    I just got done reading the last chapter of your story, and I swear, I was about to cry when i relised that would be the end. I haven't cried in three years. I was ready to just break down in my room. 'Course, all was made better when I read the rest of the author's note. PLEASE, OH PLEASE START ON THE ONE SHOTS SOON! You could really sell this, it's that good; I'd buy it with the last money I had.
    November 29th, 2008 at 06:29am
  • St_Atrocity

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    HARLEY, MY LOVE!!!
    She's so clueless and stupid, but I love here ^_^

    Anyways....
    Bravo, my love. This was beyond excellent.
    I have to admit, I got confused on so many levels, but trust me, that is such a good thing.
    This has to be the best Joker story I have ever read and I'm so glad that I found it.
    Or...someone showed me it. I don't know which one it was lol
    November 29th, 2008 at 05:18am
  • Audrey T

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    I'm about to throw a temper tantrum. My favorite Joker story is over! I really did love this story. You're a great writer. If you, let me know when you start something new. I'll be sure to check it out.
    November 29th, 2008 at 04:52am
  • Ashley ._-

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    Oh. My. God,
    I can't explain to you how AMAZING the last chapter... how GREAT it brought the whole story together...
    *sigh*
    I was holding in a breath the whole time I was reading this story and... I still haven't let it out.
    This is a new account, which is why you have never received a comment from me... but I've been reading this story pretty much from the begining.
    I can't believe you brought Harley into the picture... that was SUCH a good move from a writer's standpoint.
    I know I'm rambling but I just can't find the WORDS to describe what this story means... so much love, affection (even shown in the right, agressive ways), and trust... dedication in the one story that you wouldn't expect it to be in.
    Bravo, you actually pulled it off!
    I haven't come across a Joker story that has satisfied me yet... except this one.
    I love this story; I wish I could own it.
    xoxo,
    Ashley ._-
    November 29th, 2008 at 04:04am
  • Dana Scully

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    dfhfhkj wonderful ;D
    November 29th, 2008 at 02:32am
  • Rabar Dar Jarrar

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    HAH!

    I mean, that ... bastard. I was thinking, while he was in the asylum, what about Harley Quinn? And ... yeah. Woot? I suppose not.

    But WOW! I love this story soooo much. You have SO much potential, seriously, uhm ... yeah. I got confused at first when you switched points of view, but I got used to it and it was sort of cool because I got to see how you write both ways. And not to be a bitch or anything, because I'm still 100% in love with your story, but watch out for spelling. I suck at spelling more than anyone in the world, but I'm lucky because my computer is an asshole and checks my spelling on freaking everything. But yeah.

    May I say Biggy is the shit?

    May I also say Squid is the shizz?

    You should IN NO WAY get angry comments, because The Joker isn't supposed to be this totally upstanding guy who's a one woman man, so you know what you got his character down pat in that respect (and in most respects, hahaha) and if people are angry over that than they should read some freakin' Batman comics.

    You have no idea how much I'm looking forward to more stories from you. Watching somebody grow as a writer is always so exciting! I like how you wrotethe more violent scenes. They were good. And it was descriptive through the whole thing, which I always like. Like I say, watch out for spelling and all that English crap.

    Sim is really awesome. She's a person with emotions. She reacts like a regular person. A lot of people with Joker stories (and there are a lot of them - I checked) have these completely unbelievable characters that just murder willy nilly without any qualms over it. I know I can't talk, because my main character is a mass murderer, but my character also has a mental issue ... which explains it. Sim reacts normally to words and to actions, she's got a personality, all this and that. I did think she went from frightened about murder to slap-happy a little fast, but then again, stories here aren't really meant to take a very long time. I think that's the only issue I had, was how easily she found homocide after one murder. Other than that, I loved it and I'm really looking forward to more from you.

    Happy trails!
    :mrgreen:
    November 29th, 2008 at 02:16am
  • OhMyJellyBeans

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    OMG! Poor Sim,, Joker is a jerk, but I love him. I'm so excited for the sequel!
    November 29th, 2008 at 12:49am
  • OhMyJellyBeans

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    OMG! Poor Sim,, Joker is a jerk, but I love him. I'm so excited for the sequel!
    November 29th, 2008 at 12:49am