Wow. This is just as good as ever. However (sorry if you hate me for saying this) I don't like how Sim has gone all murder crazy really quickly after killing just one man, when it took her like, forever to do that in the first place. I love this stories originality and I'd hate for it to be ruined by Sim's behaviour. Otherwise; its great! :)
Oh My God, it has taken me freakin forever to read this whole thing! It was totally worth it though XD
Hmm...I probably could make a super-long comment, but I think I'll leave that for the next update.
Instead, I'll only say, that I am completely in love with this story, you are an amazingly brilliant writer, and I cannot wait for you to update again. Yep, that about covers it.
Awesome/adorable update. Sim is so pouty and cute;; I love her attitude. You've developed your chatacters so well -is in awe- I'll be waiting for the next chapter, til then do your best with your job please!! -Wanders off-
Okay. I'm sorry it took me so long to comment, but I had to read the whole story first. And I must say it was absolutely without a doubt AMAZING. Almost definitely one of the best fan-fics (if you could even call it that, could you? I don't know.) that I have EVER read in my life.
I dearly truly and sincerely hope that you continue to update, because I don't know that I'll be able to live without them.
I like the one you published more than the idea, because you incorperated her in, in a funny way I love the Joker in your story again; you capture him so well Phenominal, phenominal
Your story is simply amazing. <--So amazing in fact, I blew off all of Sunday reading it from start to finish. XD
I can't wait for the next update. The Joker puts me in a state of orgasmic bliss and you, my dear, have captured his drool-worthy persona perfectly. Keep up the good work, eh?
Mmm, Joker (L) Also, sorry to be a pain but, tbh, The Joker doesn't hate liars. Because he is one. He lies about how he got his scars and such. But anyways, this was great. More soon?[/size[
What's-his-butt: Coleman Reese. I never liked him, not much at all.
Near the end there ... err ... hold on.
WARNING! SADNESS. Proceed with caution and/or Kleenex.
Near the end, when The Joker was hanging from the building, I thought for a second the story would be over because The Joker had died. And then I realized that I was thinking the man who played him in the movie, not The Joker himself. I felt so awful for thinking that, honestly.
But, aside from that depressing bit of information, I loved your update. Now that The Joker isn't in the story ... errm ... again ... I'm eager to see what happens while she's on her own.
Haha. I love Puttin on the Ritz. I should download that song... Legally...
Awesome updates! I, seriously, check every day for updates. I know that you don't update everyday, but sometimes your updates catch me off guard.
As far as the different versions go... I like the one you did. It's like Sim now gets a chance to redeem herself for not killing the people Joker wanted her to kill. Not that his ass is off in Arkham, she can do whatever she needs to do. :D