OKAY caught up on this story. 1) the stuff with my darling bilvy = too sad. 2) not going to lie I dont want her to marry alex. just not feeling it. Im still team Brendon. 3) did i mention..team brendon over here?
There's just something about Alex that I don't like and her marrying him does NOT feel right. But I love how she's been visiting Bilvy a lot, thats so cute and I really like that and I'm glad shes granting his last wish. I think its going to kill her though, getting married to him just because hes dying, and I hope shes strong enough for that.
Maybe it'll even give her a wake up call about how she feels, and she'll be like ohh this is how it feels when you get married, me and alex dont have that, cue break up, cue brendon consoling her, cue brendon wedding ;)
Anyways.
LOOOVE this story. Can't wait to see another amazing update :D
you. yeah. i read this, and its bugging me. a lot. im hoping you're going to do what i'm thinking, but i doubt it, this story makes me sad, so you should message me and tell me if i should keep reading, because if this story is going to 'the bad place'(Message and i'll explain) then im not going to continue... So please, MESSAGE ME
I love this story. The only bad thing is I forgot half of it. Not really smart on my part. I did a big happy dance when this was updated. Love it. Keep up the great work.
Oh geez, I just realized that me saying "I'm glad and sorry.." meant I'm glad no one is commenting and also sorry no one is either xD What I MEANT to say was that I'm glad you updated and sorry no one is commenting.
Yayyy, another update. I'm glad and sorry that no one is commenting :] Like I said before, I really like this story and what you've done with it. Each character is really easy to become attached to and the twists in the story keep emotions running high. For some con. crit: I think there is a point where stuff just gets to be too intense and it crosses over into "random". Like, after getting used to it I liked what you did with Will being in the hospital but it does seem kinda random that he just got brain cancer and is dying, and the same goes for him trying to kill alex out of nowhere. I think a little more detail about the characters and what was going on inside, making them much more complex, would have fixed this and made it more reasonable. Please don't take that the wrong way or anything, I just felt like this wouldn't be good feedback if it didn't cover all aspects of what I felt and, as a writer myself, I know I'd like to get the same responses too. I truly DO love this story and want to see it continued and finished, as I don't think I could go on livingggg if I don't know what happens next <3
Is she gonna find Will????
Cuz that would sooooooooooooooo be awesome =DDDDD