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  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    Ah they are back together!!! Okay now I am fricken happy!
    August 24th, 2008 at 06:18pm
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    Aw!!! Poor Bren...I should not be mad at Will but I am! Look at what you are doing to me your turning me against Bilvy! You have to be a good writer to do that!
    August 24th, 2008 at 02:43am
  • theorychicken

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    RAWR!
    She has to get back together with William!!
    It's just not right man >.>
    More soon?
    August 24th, 2008 at 02:37am
  • brucepayne

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    that last chapter pissed me off so bad.
    why should she HAVE to do it?!
    he hurt her, he was an asshole so she does something she wants to do but then he spoils it AGAIN and suddenly pete guilt trips her and she'd GOT to go home and talk to him.

    if it were me it would be 'screw william'
    i'd run away again.
    because no-one deserves to be hurt like that let alone more than once.

    brilliant updates
    August 23rd, 2008 at 09:29pm
  • priscillaelise

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    of course not!
    i love brendon too!
    and woah.
    drama rama time
    woah.
    i cannot believe will stopped the freaking tour.
    August 22nd, 2008 at 08:19am
  • blueside

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    <3
    August 22nd, 2008 at 05:06am
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    No I wouldn't kill you but I should slap you silly! BILVY BILVY BILVY! haha No, really I like Brendon too. =) Great update, I didn't get a notification for this one. =(
    August 22nd, 2008 at 01:57am
  • dannipurple

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    awww! I love this story! Poor Brendon though :(
    He was so sweet to her
    August 21st, 2008 at 08:50pm
  • theorychicken

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    holy quack.
    i love it O.o
    AYE!
    William...why?
    August 21st, 2008 at 06:59pm
  • priscillaelise

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    WHOOO!
    i love this story.
    you have some serious skills.
    : DDD
    but brendon?
    really?
    o.O
    ehhhh, i actually think
    that this whole brendon, adidie
    thing is good.
    that way will gets mad
    and a whole load of drama happens.
    ;]]
    August 20th, 2008 at 11:33pm
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    I want to kill Brendon, can I? Of course I mean figuralitivy, like pretend, I would never actually harm the boy...I'm not psycho.
    August 20th, 2008 at 10:25pm
  • andiegube

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    Aww, Brendon is going to watch out for her! He better not try any funny business though or I will beat him to a pulp!
    xD same here though I love Brendon Urie.
    awesome update, can't wait for more.
    August 20th, 2008 at 01:47am
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    Aww, Brendon is going to watch out for her! He better not try any funny business though or I will beat him to a pulp!
    August 20th, 2008 at 12:07am
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    She is leaving!!! Where is she going???? I am jealous you got your cd...mine is still not here...bah!
    August 19th, 2008 at 01:48am
  • andiegube

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    that was sad :(
    i loved how you tied in the lyrics to automatic eyes.
    this story is amazing, i can't wait for more.
    August 18th, 2008 at 10:36pm
  • brucepayne

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    idc that he isnt perfect
    it's steal grrish.
    -hitswilliam-
    -slaps'whoreface'-
    August 18th, 2008 at 08:04pm
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    I am so happy you updated! I was fricken ecstatic no lie! Stupid Bilvy, but we do all make mistakes but Grr!
    August 18th, 2008 at 08:03pm
  • andiegube

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    oh no! Will, why???
    loved the update. the emotions in that chapter were strong and I loved how you referred to "That's what you get." one of my favorite Paramore songs :)
    August 18th, 2008 at 07:55pm
  • Ethan.

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    OMG! There are not many TAI stories but this is the best one I have ever read!
    I cant believe Will, how could he do that! I was like no!
    You have to update soon! x
    August 18th, 2008 at 07:45pm
  • Designated Drinker

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    Is it weird to say this and the last chapter are my favorites so far?
    And you put a little bit of suspence in the last one, not fair.
    Update Soon!!!!
    August 18th, 2008 at 06:54pm