Dream Breaker - Comments

ahh i love it....its been so long. I hope you update soon

love this story, and gosh do they just need to come clean about their feelings!

loveddd it please update(:

Wow I think Brian is learning from his mistakes but he is also hurting Aubrey too.
I mean he ended their relationship in a note and here he is saying that slut Shauna deserves to have the break up face to face.
I am glad that Aubrey is just taking her frustration out on him and he does deserves everything she gives.
Brian definitely needs to end his so called relationship with that bitch because she is just trying to control Brian and just keep him for herself.
I seriously believe that Brian made a freaking huge mistake for picking a trashy whore over Aubrey just because that bitch a like a fresh of new air.
So Aubrey is going to see Jake again and I really think Brian would not like that at all because of how he reacted when they first saw at Palm Springs together!
I am so dying for the next update!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BOOM, BITCH! Team Audrey. ;)

More pleaseeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :))))

Okay I am so extremely happy that I got an email for this story because I have been dying for the next update!
And I am happy that Aubrey is having a great time with Jake since it's been very hectic for Aubrey these weeks with Brian and his skanky ass so called girlfriend.
But Jake is freaking adorable when he said that he could be a dairy that Aubrey could hug whenever since he is a very good listener!
I am glad that some of his sister rubbed off onto him and he is sensitive and knows how to approach Aubrey without making a fool out of himself.
But what I loved most was when Brian saw Aubrey at the same restaurant with Jake and got really upset about it!
And to add the cherry on top, Brian finally told that skanky whore what he really thought and that he is the one in their so called relationship paying for everything!
He does love Aubrey despite what he tries to tell himself because he thought about him marrying Aubrey way before he met that slut at the concert.
Man that skank really wants to be in everybody's business. like how she disrupted Aubrey's dinner with Jake and Aubrey kindly but viciously told that bitch to leave!!!!!!
I begging you to PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love this new update. I hope that skank shauna dies

If I was Audrey, I would have hit Shauna, pregnant or not. Just sayin'.

I knew a girl like shauna once she said similar crap to me.......ask her how her 2 week hospital stay way nd the new nose job ;) talk shit get hit is the moto of my family!

U knew a girl like shauna once she said similar crap to me.......ask her how her 2 week hospital stay way nd the new nose job ;) talk shit get hit is the moto of my family!

ooohhhhhh!! xD
more soon!?

More pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xD PLEASE! I'm beggingggg! I wanna know if that's where Brian and bitch are going, though they probably are but it's better in words on this site in this story if your picking up what I'm puttin' down? ;DDD

Man Brian is complete fucking coward!!!!!
He keeps dodging the questions that Eric keeps asking and I was really hoping that Eric would do some harm to him but at least Eric left Brian to think about the consequences of his actions.
Like cheating on Aubrey when she remained faithful to him with some loose slut he met at a concert, dumping her after Aubrey's tells her that she is pregnant with his children and talking shit about her behind her back.
I think Brian is complete coward, he says all this when he can't even give Eric a real answer.
I just want to hurt Brian so much because he is running away from his responsibilities as a father and Eric can relate too since he got Aubrey's mother pregnant early.
Aw Jake is taking Aubrey out!!!! X3
At least he is man enough to ask Aubrey even though she is pregnant, maybe Brian seeing Aubrey with another man will wake his feelings he still has for her.
I think Brian just gave Eric excuses because Brian is too scared to answer truthfully.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just discovered this story this morning and I love it, love it, love it! It's so well written and I can't wait to see how Audrey and Jake's date goes. He might just turn out to be what Audrey needs right now! :)

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Brian does need to man up.
&& I bet they all end up at the same place! >:D

Smh at Brian he needs to step up nd be a man :/

Damnit Brian should have said he loved Audrey...then maybe the bitch would leave faster....grr.
But him Eric had a man to man with Brian. Hoped it helped.
Mmm do I sense a run in at the Palms?
You know since Brian and Shuana and Audrey and her date are both going out on well dates.
That would be so awkward, interesting, funny and epic all at the same time! XD

Great update :]
I loved it!

hahahahah Brian and Audrey are so gonna run into each other lol

and he almost slipped and said he loved her lol

awesome update! =)

great story!
more soon!?!?!? :D