I read Chapter 2 of this and was like, holding my breath the whole time :P and my eyes were wide. Man I'm cool. And this story is THE sex, seriously amazing :D
I L-O-V-E this story as well. It was uber creepy in the beginning, but tears were pricking my eyes when everyone was sure Gerard was dead, and when he snuck into Ren's house, giving her a kiss under her bed. That was so sweet. I adore the moments that occur when things are wonderful. Maybe terrible also. I'm weird like that... Anyways going to go read the third. I bet it will be equally as fabulous as it predecessers.
i also have a question are you going to be updationg both "you're going live" and "the true horror that began on friday the 13th" because i don't know if i read both or just "you're going live"
OMG Dude! I've been busy I never got a chance to read the rest of your story! Ahh! But, it was awesome. Is Gerard going crazy again? If he does it's gona be sad, with baby Charlie in the house and everything. Bleh, Imma start reading the other story! I hope it's as great as these two! :D
the ending was epic. i felt sooooooooooooooooooooo bad for gerard. he really shouldn't have been put through that. that totally helped mess him up for the rest of his life lol anywayyyyyyy. rewinding a little. charlie james arthur way. so cute. love it. it was so nice to see ren's mom stopping by. she was learning to accept things for the way they are. which is totally cool. ehhhhh. i forgot what else i wanted to say. OH YEAH. mikey, mikey, mikey. tsk, tsk, tsk. he watches the video for his own dirty pleasure. what a dirty bastard. hahahahhahahaa. but oh well. he's a dude, he can't help himself. haha. i cant wait to read the sequellllll. and i was going to say something else. ummmmmm. oh, yeah. people are choosing to be on teams. is it possible to be on both? hahaha. <33
I can't believe Mikey still watches that video... That's sick. But I still love Mikey and I'm still wanting him and Ren to get together. So excited about the sequel for the sequel! :D
I knew Mikey was perverted! Oh yeah! This goes out to anyone else still on team Gerard! *cricket noises* damn, I guess its just me.
That was one hell of an ending in chapter 40, seriously, that's some fucking genius mind. I liked having the part where you have some of Gerard's past in there? I think its cool how you can go from, a present day setting, and then add something from his past...but it still makes sense, y'know?
-I mean if I tried that, it'd probably sound pretty stupid. -Your inspiring!
This is genius, I really really REALLY like this, you totally set up the beginning for chapter 41!
Oh damn. I was so freaking wrong about the whole camera thing! GAH!
You know what? I was actually starting to feel sympathetic for Gerard but the ending and all killed it. And you know what else? I'm still on *Team Mikey* here because he and Ren deserve each other. So what if Mikey still has that nasty video? Out of all the things Gerard has done, Mikey's still a saint, with or without that video. [:
Gah!! I hate, Gerard. Seriously, I hate him so much!! I can't wait to see what is going to happen. Poor Gerard, I felt for him but that is slowly ebbing away.
Awesome story!