Dude, this was sweet. Fer sure. Between Ren's mom coming to apologise and then Gerard's relationship with the baby, this chapter made me smile a little. [:
Awwwh, Sure, he acts like the perfect gentleman now. But, I awwwhed at the part with Mikey. I want them together!! Lol, but that would make Gerard insane.. he's already insane enough... Seriously.
I love this story to fucking pieces. I don't think I can handle Gerard doing anything else stupid! Aw, little Charlie sounds so cute! I'm on team Gerard still...though I can see that might change, I feel like beating the shit out of Gerard, but I want to hug him and tell him he needs a real job! I love your story so frikkin much, its fucking awesome.
blahhh. i'm in crunch time right now. i think this is going to be sorta short. SO. yeah.
what happened to the whole choosing between ren and the baby? HAHA, i would have liked to see gerard going psycho and crazy and out of control. i'm mean i know. but i still liked the way you did it and did not make gerard go crazier than he already is. i like how mikey's all pro at pregnancy. but i guess that it helps that he is lol he should just be pregnant. that should be your spin off story. mikey way being pregnant hahahahaha. just kidding :] the all powerful epi-pen. it saves lives. haha i liked the part where he started spazzing out. haha. i know that it's not meant to be funny, but to me it was for some reason. geez, thirteen hours of labor. that must suck balls. i think the baby should have a middle name. charlie _____ way :] mikey was such a nice guy in these chapters. helping out and everything, like it was his own child ...well, he wishes it was his own child. then i feel bad for him cause he would totally treat and care for her wayyyyyyy better than gerard. but then gerard would basically do anything for her. thennnnnn. gerard should stop sneaking around ren's back. and not sneak out of the hospital. and get a better job than a stripper/prostitute. although being a stripper/prostitute can get you a lot more money in just one night than in one whole week at some other regular job. whatever. i think he's just digger himself deeper in a shitty hole haha. mikey will be/would be/is going to be so pissed off if/when he finds out that gerard is going to tape him. dirty videosssss. i bet that marvin guy is going to share the videos or something. or maybe he won't. and gerard then is going to have some eating disorder HAHAHA. just kiddinggggg. or maybe he will cause he has to loose some weight for his job. -shrugs- anywho. i wonder how he's going to get all those videosssssss? lol besides the one he already has of ren and him. now i cant wait to read the next onesssss.
Woo for sequels! Im reeeally not liking rob *shudder* he reminds me of those creepy guys you find perving at you on the bus. Yay! baby charlie is here =) MORE MORE MORE... please.. x
Man I can't believe Gerard is going to use that tape. I'm surprised they still have it, since he was 'dead.' I figured they would of got rid of it or something, but I guess someone loved it, if its still there. Lol, love the update, can't wait to see wants going to happen, and just think about how if Ren did find out about it, then it would be hell again. Wait no, she can't find out, but though it would make things intersecting. Anyways, can't wait for the update.
Man I can't believe Gerard is going to use that tape. I'm surprised they still have it, since he was 'dead.' I figured they would of got rid of it or something, but I guess someone loved it, if its still there. Lol, love the update, can't wait to see wants going to happen, and just think about how if Ren did find out about it, then it would be hell again. Wait no, she can't find out, but though it would make things intersecting. Anyways, can't wait for the update.
omifucking god. I swear if Gerard does anything else stupid, I'm going to mutilate my computer. I think a sequel to this is a good idea :D Your story is so freakin amazing, in a piss-off sort of way. It makes me want to beat the crap out of Gerard, but it also makes me want to give him a hug! I know, weird. Its amazingly awesome, pleae continue, I really look forward to your updates!
Yay. I know i'm starting to sound like a broken record but Mikey is sooo much better for Ren i mean, he's kind and consideret, and just everything she needs.
hahah Love the shout outr and cant wait for the next update..I mean Gerard is such a dirty boy and his motives are right its just the way he goes about them wich makes me hate him.
I loved the update It didn't even tell me you updated until this chapter! But I love this story none the less. I can't wait to see what happens. I really want her with Mikey. I'm with "Team Mikey" on this one. Gerard, I just don't like him in this story. Though, I felt bad for him.
I gave a silent cheer when I got an email saying this was updated. Your a seriously talented writer and you make chills go up my spine. Please update soon. I can't believe Gerard's thinking about doing that to Ren though. What a bastard.
I think Gee should quit. I cant believe he would think about selling Mikey&Ren like that =[. I know its 2 support Ren&Baby Charlie X][Cant help but smile lol]but it wud kill her if she found out =S.
**For some reason, at the end of that chapter, Meds by Placebo was playing in mi head lol.
Okay..even though..I've been saying I wanted Ren and Mikey to be together.. I didn't mean this way xD This sounds like a bad idea...I mean, I get Gee just wants to save his family but like...ugh >< I don't think Gerard is really thinking this through....
And doll face, thanks for the thanks! xD I love this story =) It's amazing.