I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you need to update like immediately/AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. haha, man i missed this story so much. but is it done????? it sounded it like it ended. if not update!!! hehe :D
~T. Strange~
P.S. did you miss me?? if you don't remember, i might've been commenting a lot before like earlier in the story(i think). it's been a while since i've been on mibba and i remember commenting on a lot of stories that i have read and i'm to lazy to check if i did on this one. hehe well i'm done rambling now. hehe. :) and if you need more lyrics or anything just say. haha okay, now i done :)
=DD You have no idea how happy I was when I saw that you updated. I almost screamed. xD And I totally agree with you on the haunted house thing! That's one of the reasons they make me nervous, cuz if someone really wanted to, they could totally go ape-shit on you in a haunted house and no one would know. =/ But ANYwho. I love that he killed Harley. That like, made my week. It was just... So cute... In a really horrible way. xD And I've also been wondering if you were gunna incorporate the actual storyline in there more, cuz I wanna see what Playlist would do, ya know? AND. LAST THING, I SWEAR. Do you still need more lyrics??? I can message you with a BUTT-TON if you do. x3 - WatchesFromShadows
This story... Let me just tell you, is fricken beastly. xD I love how Playlist and Joker can just randomly go on a tangent like how no one ever says the exact minute when telling someone the time, and shiz like that. It also amuses me how Playlist can be like, "Huh, I'm bored and I'm feelin pretty shitty. I think I'll go kill someone! -shoots someone-" xD It just makes me laugh. - WatchesFromShadows
ha! loved it! I like the plot twist of Elizabeth coming back into the scene and wanting to join. very nice, very nice! and I also like the subtleness of the 'Matress Mambo' and such. clever. ;)
Lovely banner, doll. This chapter was just what I needed: a good read. The lyrics you chose were flippin' great! I mean, you changed practically the whole view of the lyrics. When they're supposed to be innocent, you made them psychotic! Love that. Have fun, darling ♥
okay so I've finally read this whole story up to Chapter 27 and....I LOVE IT! OH MY GOD WHERE DO I BEGIN? HAHAHA, harley's hair. and the asylum thing? genius! I just love every SINGLE word and letter. but continue writing please? I love this story so much. ahhhhh! ~Love Freak Show
This chapter was epic! Pretending to be psychologists!? Ha! Great :3
I love how she just strolls into the police station and is all like "ha, I'm a killer pretending to be a momma and I'm crying and yelling at your sorry asses and you don't even know who the fuck I am" xD
I'm sorry you've been losing comments. If it makes you feel any better, know that everyone I talk to has also. I don't know what it is lately, but less and less Mibbians are leavings feedback. Or if they are it's just some "more soon please" I'd rather have one heartfelt comment than 12 "more soon"s how 'bout you?
You're awesome for taking time to do this! I can't manage writing lately :( I hope this comment makes up for the lack of comments lately. So i"ll do something for you that I love getting myself: Time for my favorite lines!!!! :DDDD
One question, why do hobos piss on the floor when there are four fucking bathrooms in this warehouse? Even if the water isn’t turned on and doesn’t work you could still piss in the shower or sink and it would drain! Hobos piss me off. That's just epic shit right there!
Seeing this odd man that resembled him on the streets had me scared for a moment but once we got closer I saw a few differences so the whole ordeal was dismissed as paranoia, and in the back of my mind I contemplated it also being caused by missing him. But missing him would be worse, and weaker, than being afraid of him. That seriously gave me chills.
“Me. I’m not the same without you. Nothing is the same without you. I can’t remember how to be the Joker without you. And everything is so boring.” I could just hear him saying this! That was so well-scripted, you have no idea ♥
That fact did, at first, make me a little uneasy but I was quite a bit relieved that I’d get the chance to kill her myself, and Jack confirmed that I could. Awww fuck, some shit's about to go down!!
I have come to realize that your story is one of those amazing pieces that sounds perfect when read aloud. It's just breathtaking ♥
~T. Strange~
P.S. did you miss me?? if you don't remember, i might've been commenting a lot before like earlier in the story(i think). it's been a while since i've been on mibba and i remember commenting on a lot of stories that i have read and i'm to lazy to check if i did on this one. hehe well i'm done rambling now. hehe. :) and if you need more lyrics or anything just say. haha okay, now i done :)