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Wow. That was vivid, lol. Very vivid.
It's a bit jarring, though, when you skip between formal language and more casual language.
But otherwise, this is great.
Subscribed, looking forward to an update.

May 18th, 2007 at 08:39pm
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wait im confused. where was she going and what or who smaked him. i dont understand the last paragraph

May 18th, 2007 at 05:22pm
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i like i like i like VAMPIRES ARE THE SHIT!!!! this story fucking rocks!!!

May 7th, 2007 at 04:39am
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It's freaking GORGEOUS.

May 4th, 2007 at 07:38am

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