Led By Pride - Comments

Sequel ???????

I love it! Thank you for sharing this story with us! I'm so glad he remembered and they live Happily Ever After.

I LOVE IT!!!!
I didn't want it to end but yeah.. You couldn't write this story forever lol.
<<<3 Mary

AH!!! I friddgin love this story!!! Its absolutely amazing.!!!

Hell YES!!! I loved it!! Beginning to end!!.. God i loved that ending. I loved the twist. GOd!!! Yay!!! :]

ACK!
YAYA!
*screams*
*squeals*
*runs in circles*
HE REMEMBERS
HAHAHAHA!
YAY!
YEAH!
HELL- EFFIN - YEAH!
*squeals*
i can't wait for the update!
ill be checkin every once in a while to when it's up so i can subscribe!
=)

tomk:

Hi Katelyn,

I read the first ten chapters of your story, and got too tired to finish it. I liked it. You have another real gift, and I think you should keep on writing. It is a bit on the crude side in parts, but that is how the world really is. As long as you keep the rough language to your stories, and I don't have to listen to it coming out of your mouth, I am ok with it, Also please don't go for the body piercings and tattoos in real life. They really disgust me. I know a lot of people think they are cool, but I am not one of them. Anyway, keep writing, and I have an idea for another story I would like you to consider writing. I will talk to you later.

Love,

Dad

btw. i think thats pretty tight how ur dad commented ur story^_^
i wish my parents cared enough to read what i do..
lol

omg i love this story!
im sad theres only one left=[
update soon!

Oh. My. Sweet REV-LATION! Cruelty to end it there. I need the epilogue!

Hi Katelyn,

I read the first ten chapters of your story, and got too tired to finish it. I liked it. You have another real gift, and I think you should keep on writing. It is a bit on the crude side in parts, but that is how the world really is. As long as you keep the rough language to your stories, and I don't have to listen to it coming out of your mouth, I am ok with it, Also please don't go for the body piercings and tattoos in real life. They really disgust me. I know a lot of people think they are cool, but I am not one of them. Anyway, keep writing, and I have an idea for another story I would like you to consider writing. I will talk to you later.

Love,

Dad

omg..that update was amazing!

I shrieked when he remembered!

you didnt overplay this story....you ended it just right

i can't wait for the epilogue

YAY! he remembered :D

im so happy he remember! :)

yay!
he remembered!!!
but sad that theres only one part left!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW

i loved it
but i really dont want it to end i love this story

I DONT WANT THIS TO ENDD ;_______;
I almost teared up. :(

loved how she was telling val everything val was going to do
more soon

aww, brian stayed the night with her, even tho she puked on him!!!

haha, love the fortune telling
so cute.
now get them together! now!