May 28th, 2009 at 05:27am
Thank you so much!
- cemetery drive.:
- I know this story is kind of long over now, but I just wanted to comment anyway. I really liked it, along with its prequel which I also read. It was cute, romantic, funny, and sad, all in one story. You're an excellent writer. I guess the only criticism I could have with it was that I wouldn't really classify it as a Frerard, more as just an MCR fic with elements of Frerard. Though Frank and Gerard were together in the end, and did have an affair during the prequel, it was mainly based on the lives and relationships of Gerard/Ellie/Rosie/MCR, so this is why I wouldn't exactly call it a Frerard. I still loved it though, don't worry! I wouldn't be commenting if I didn't!
So, with that said ~ don't be surprised if I end up subscribing to any other story of yours! Well done, and thank you!
:hug: :arms:
P.S. At first, I hated Ellie, because I thought she was Eliza Cuts, and you'd just given her a slightly different, alternative name (Ellie/El/Eleanor). But then I realised through the way you signed off the author's notes that she was actually you! (right?)
I didn't hate her as much after that. Only a little bit, because she got in the way.
Yeh, Ellie is based on me, not Eliza.
xx
Gerard probably would have gone to jail. Sex with a minor still counts as 'rape', even if consent is given. So, in the eyes of the law, what Gerard did was still illegal. Sorry to be knit-picking, but I just thought you might want to know for future reference ...
And admit it; I wouldn't be commenting and correcting the facts if I didn't love this story so much!! :D
Honestly, it was such a great story, and different from any one that I've ever read. Congratulations.
:hug: :arms: