Wow. That was amazingly written and so emotional. I managed not to cry up until the poem bit. I read that at my Grandfather's funeral, it totally choked me up!
Mmmm... Yoo asked us not to cry...I'm trying.. Ah, that was so mother fucking sad!! I was listening to Your Call by Secondhand Serenade the whole time.. It made me wanna cry more!! -sigh- Ellie really is gone =( OMG! and How Ellie said to fine someone new, and that it could be Frankie!! Poor Gerard..what's he going to do? He's shattered, completely gutted..
You know. I think... She's gone. Sorry, that made me giggle. Excuse my crap sense of humour. It's just a very twisted sense of humour more than anything. Sorry, not the moment to try and be humourous.
AHHH! Gawd Damnit! I was NOT going to cry!! When she was talknig to Jeri I almost lost it but kept my kewl! ...You killed my with Rosie though I cryed I'll admit it! I mean..how could you NOT after that?! the whole chapter though I was liek...When's Rosie gonna come? Aint she gonna say goodbye too? And then she did! It's so fucking sad that Ellie has to die =(
Naww, :( I don't want her to die. Hang on... doesn't this mean that you're killing yourself..? Lol, I guess it does. That's minorly amusing for some reason. Anyway... :) if i triple post will you update straight away? XD.
-sniffle- This..is..so..SAD!! Dx El is like..really gonna die =( I was hoping maybe she'd well...just get better!! But that's not gonna happen =( -tear- This is gonna be really sad for the next few chapters =(
........................... ......................... ........................ ....................... ...................... ..................... .................... ................... .................. ................. ................ Ellie's gonna die?? WTF?!?!?!?!? Ellie can't DIE!!! Oh no...oh, oh no....Poor Gerard!! Loosing his only son AND his wife all in one day?!?! Ohmy Ellie's poor baby! What we all want most? We get Frankie?! Yay! -sigh- alas this joy is over shadowed by the saddness of loosing Ellie =(
Oh no...Still born...Poor Gee and Ellie...poor baby boy =( This reminds me of the tv show Brothers & Sisters....cuz Gee and Ellie were having twins...twins came early...the baby boy died...=( Lets hope things don't continue the way the show went though -bits lip- haha yea I'm rambling sorry.. Loved the update...even if it was sad =( At least the baby girl's okay =) And Rosie will now have a little sister =)
I never get on the comp grrrr.
But wow! How emotional, and gripping.
Argh, I still love this story.
Keep it up. xoxoxo