i think it would be really good swing in the story if Ed tries to make Jade his pet, but then Jade being Jade, refuses everything he does and stuff. i don't know, your better at this stuff then i am. i love it... i'm so so so so so happy you made a sequal! :D:D:D:D:D:D I lovezzzzzzzz youuuuuuuu!
ed could make jade his pet, she wouldnt have much of a prob with that. but that wouldnt be much of a story now... or would it? lol idk where im going with this. great job!