Alone With You - Comments

DAMN YOU!!!!
soo.... close... and then.... cliffhanger...
grr...
He's got to be pregnant...
Nobody's that moody...
anywhos...
ME LOVERS IT!!
more please!!

waits for more not so patiently :3 hehe i love this story

waits for more not so patiently :3 hehe i love this story

love it!!

more soon =]]

ohohohohohhhhhhhhhh!! moment of truth moment of truth!!!

*crosses fingers for Synacky baby*

love it xox

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oh noes the moment of truth

aww man cliffhanger! lol cute chapter though! i love how zacky was being a goof with the doors! haha

i'm dying from anticipation!

Is Zacky okay? He seems just so totally out of it in this story, and it's kind of creepy. Still, it was really fun to read, and I can't wait to find out if Zacky and Brian are going to be parents.

love it :]
is zee preggo?
can't wait for the next update.

awwwh bless!

i hope things stay good for them...

...meep

teehees love it xox

:O so are they forgiven?

aww yay! but is zacky preggers? and why couldn't he get it up? haha sorry to be blunt but i'm curious!

YAYNESS!!!
I LOVES THIS STORY!!!!!

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I stood there, my anger and upset increasing my the second as I saw them lying there. Michelle, his apparent ’ex-girlfriend’ with the duvet pulled up around her naked body and my Brian, lying there next to her, both panting slightly, thank God I didn’t walk in a few minutes earlier. Brain stopped smiling when he saw me stood there with tears now flowing freely down my face. His face quickly paled as Michelle sat up and noticed me.

“Oh my God, Zacky, you didn’t see that did you?” She asked giggling touching Brian’s chest with her fake nails and shit. He just sat there, completely stunned, guilt creeping over his face. I turned on my heel and walked out, wiping my eyes as I walked towards the stairs. I heard muffled yelling and clattering of belts, I couldn’t care less what was happening. I ran down the stairs and flew through the front door.

Words cannot describe how I’m feeling now. He was obviously there before her as her car was parked behind his. I ran to my car and heard the front door open again, I turned and saw Brian there, only in his jeans, if I weren’t so mad at him now then the sight before me would really turn me on.

“Babe, wait don’t go.” he said running in my direction. I ignored him and got in my car anyway, locking the doors behind me. I knew I couldn’t drive in the state I was in, I would definitely have a crash. I saw Brian crouched at the blacked out window saying something I couldn’t register what he was saying. I looked up out of the window to see him with stray tears running down his face, my face completely soaked with tears. I pressed the button that made the window go down and looked at him.

“What the fuck are you doing,” I said

“I don’t know, one minute I was packing, next minute she was there saying how much she loved me, it was only the once, I was going to dump her straight after I swear.” he whined sagging his head.

“But you still did it, I don’t care if you hurt her feelings, I don’t care if you felt bad. You were with me, just because she turns up of your doorstep, saying ‘oh Brian I love you take me back so I can spend all of you money at the mall on my fake hair and nails’ doesn’t give you the right to go and cheat on the boyfriend you apparently loved. Did it even occur to you that were going for a pregnancy scan later?” I screamed at him

“Yes, but I couldn’t do it, we were together for two years, I cant just throw that away” he muttered

“Yes you could, you had me Syn, just because you were together for ages doesn’t mean that you still love her. We have been on tour for months and you didn’t mention her once. She cheated on you remember, that’s why you broke up, because she was pregnant with someone else’s baby and you found the abortion documents,” I shouted even louder, Michelle’s face going red as she walked out of the house. She was wearing the sluttiest clothes ever, white top that barley covered her boobs and a skirt that may as well been a belt.

“I’m so sorry.” he said crying.

“I don’t care I’m going to that appointment later, come if you want I don’t care, all I wanted to do is go with you because I wanted someone there with me, actually I don’t want you there, I’m not saying you cant go because you have a right to, but I would prefer it if you didn’t.” I explained. I shut the window and started the car. I backed out of the drive way and looked back at Syn, he was sat knelt on the brick bawling like a baby. I drove down the road and looked in the rear view to see him curled up on the pavement shaking as he cried.

I couldn’t bare to see him like that. My heart was telling me to go back to him, but my brain was telling me to go home and sort things out. I went with my brain. I drove home my upset and anger fusing together to make a feeling that I had never felt before, yeah I’ve been cheated on before, but I’ve never thought about it so much. I left my car and lay down on the black leather couch, the exact same position as before, but now I was feeling totally different.

*time elapse 2 hours*

Its now about half one and I still hadn’t moved, thinking over and over again about what happened today. I pondered over the thought once more until I heard the ruffling of envelopes through the door. Just the mailman. The noise carried on for about a minute until it stopped. I sat up and walked to the door to see around 50 giant envelopes puffed up with whatever was inside.

I picked them all up and took them to the couch where I placed them all on the coffee table. I didn’t know when to start. I picked up the first envelope to see it has ‘Zacky’ Written on the front, no address or zip code so it was obviously delivered personally. I looked and they were all like that. I opened the envelope and poured out the contents to see hundreds of ripped up pieces of paper. I looked at one of them to see it read,
‘Baby, I love you
Bri
X’

I smiled as tears came to my eyes, I looked at a second one to see the words,
‘I’m so sorry
Bri
X’

After about ten minutes to figure they all said either one of them statements I went and looked through the window to see Brian sat on the park opposite under the big tree we used to climb. I looked at him, he looked do sad. He was just sat there staring at his feet, tears streaming down his face. I looked at him, then back at the letters, then at him again.

I walked to the front door and stood there for a while, if I go out there then I’m forgiving him, if I say here I’m making it harder for us. I can understand why he slept with her though, its not like I’ve never had guilt sex before. I walked outside and licked the front door. I crossed the street and made my way over to him, he hadn’t seen me until I sat down by his side. He turned to me, eyes red and puffy, his bottom lip breaking from where he had been biting it.

“I’m sorry.”

I had to quote the whole chapter. It was just so... so... I'm speechless! I don't know whether to be pissed at Bri or cry for them both! This was so beautifully written!

I was stood at the mirror, elbows resting on the mantle looking at my reflection while Brian was sat on the couch behind me, still wiping the tears from his eyes.

Awes...

“So, why did you do it?” I asked for about the millionth time, “is it because I’m fat?”

YOU ARE NOT FAT! You have a VERY cute pudge Zee!!!

“Is it because I have a big nose?” I asked again rubbing my face.

O.O where the fuck did that come from?

“Bad hair?” I said twisting a lock of my hair in my fingers.

XD Bad hair... Yeah fucking right!

“My boobs aren’t big enough for you?” I questioned again looking at my chest.

XD Oh My God!

I looked at his eyes, guilt and sorrow glazed over them. I crawled over too him and wrapped my legs around his waist and my arms around his neck.



I would comment 100000 x all the numbers in the world and beyond. Just for you to update!

:cry: So sad. I still think Bri needs to be tested before the get intimate again.

thank god!
i thought i was gonna have to smack you if you made them stay mad at eachother =p

more sooooon!

I can't believe Brian would do that! Though, I am confused by the fact that Brian seems to be taking this harder than Zacky is. Anyway, wonderful update and I'll try to wait for the next chapter.

i love it!!!
more soon!