Alone With You - Comments

I LOVE THIS STORY IT IS DIFFRENT!!!!
ANYWAY PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!

Your story is amazing. I love it.

Please update soon.

gaaaaah!!! that's where you leave it!?!

please, for the sake of your readers' sanity, UPDATE!!!

(: please?

teehees love it xox

this is really sad....
i feel so sorry for zacky............
its gunna be weird it he is pregnant......
xox

fuck brian!

ick! If Zack takes him back it needs to be with muiltple tests that say CLEAN if ya know what I mean.

aw that was sad...but good! i hope everything gets happy again!

Not to be rude but,

Whatever Mofo has read this story, and copied it to another website needs help. It's not my fault you can't write or think of your own ideas so don't take the credit for something that I have put time and effort into. And to top it all of, when I left a comment saying that you've copied it, you deleted the story AND your account. Pathetic.

Okay, rant over lol

Thank you for commenting x

GINGE

*gasps* omg! don't leave a cliffhanger like that! what happened?!

oooooooh, plot twist!!!

*sigh* and thing were going so well for them...

can't wait do see what you come up with next xox

Loved it :]
Can't wait for more.
-pout-

She and Johnny are meeting up for a hot date on Friday night and I gave him the ‘no sex on the first date’ talk,

Hah! He wouldn't be getting any anyways! i'm not having sex till I'm married! *does stubborn pose* lol

That’s it, I’m going to Brians, three hours and not a phone call or a text

So pregnant... He's fuming. He should know by now that Brian Haner Jr. takes a million years when it comes to clothing.

with someone else’s car parked behind it

O.O

I almost passed out at the sight before me.

*screams*

NO! WHAT'S GOING ON! BRIAN YOU MOTHER FUCKER I SWEAR TO GOD! *screams out too bad of language to be said even by self*

what, what WHAT!?

And you leave it there?! MORE PLEASE!

WOO HOO FOR TEN STARS!!!!

I woke up and looked at Brain, our naked forms pressed together as he slept peacefully, his still sweaty hair resting on his forehead, tattooed chest slowly rising and falling, his arms wrapped securely around my waist.

Drools absent mindedly. Wow...

but I just couldn’t get it up.

*covers mouth to stop fits of laughter* Poor Zee-Bear!

I shook it again, only this time harder and his left eye opened casually. I lay there not knowing what to do, so I smiled, no, I grinned like a Cheshire cat, eyes scrunched, mouth wide with all teeth showing. He sighed and rolled over with his back to me.

:lmfao Omg I can actually imagine that!

“well phone your dog then” he said sleepily

Ichabod C Vengeance! *squeals* SO CUTE! *shifts eyes* okay I love his dog is that such a fucking crime!? *giggles* and just a note: You're still not putting capitols after the Quotation marks. Instead of “well phone your dog then” it should be “Well phone your dog then” and you still arents putting punctuation before he last quotation mark. at the end of “Well phone your dog then" there should be a comma. “Well phone your dog then,". Just try and remember that.

“no, dickhead, I mean do you feel like your pregnant?”

*giggles* that was funny XD

“well, your stomach’s been doing well lately, so I though that it deserved a treat” he said laughing and kissing my neck. Making me squeal loudly, I head Jimmy whisper from above us something involving ‘shut up’ fuck’ and ‘baseball bat’ so I have no clue as to what was said but I laughed at it anyway.

*laughs histarically no longer able to hold it in and falls off chair*

okay now next chapter!

I ran to the toilet again and threw up for the third time this morning,

ZACKARY JAMES BAKER! STOP BEING IN SOME SORT OF DENIAL! *puts on the you are high, way too high squeaky messed up voice* you are pregnant, oh so pregnant!

after I throw up my hormones rage and I can go from all peace and love to murdering somebody in the bat of an eyelid

OMFG! Sounds like my mom when she was having my brother! o.O

“I already know the fucking answer, maybe if you weren’t so horny then we would be able to know what happened when” I snapped, there we go, hormones.

“I’m sorry that you’ve lost the ability to pop a boner no need to take it out on me”

*laughs more*

“sometimes, when your sat making out that’s a bit creepy, but we have all gotten used to it really, we knew it was gonna happen, you were always giving each other with the sex eye, it was so funny.” he said laughing. As I laughed with him that feeling of nausea swamped my body as I curled over and puked onto the cement.

*smiles* HE'S SO PREGNANT!

No denying it! Oh. My. God. Who's gonna be the god father!? *looks at A7X crew members, manager (Larry Jacobson = totaly fucking awsome) and then to Jimmy, Johnny, and Matty Cakes* Hmmm...

I walked out into the screams and roars form the crowd

Avenged came on the T.V. last night and I turned the TV up all the way and I was still screaming louder than it! I couldn't help it! My neighbors called the cops XD

’Critical Acclaim’

*sings*

Sh, be, quiet, you might piss somebody off
LIKE ME YOU MOTHER FUCKER YOUVE BEEN AT IT FOR TOO LONG!

*giggles*

Love that song!

‘Almost Easy‘

I'm not insane, I'm not insane...
HAHAHAHA!

I looked up and saw that girl that Johnny was checking out was walking towards me with her friends.

If it were true... I'd die!

a guy with black and pink hair asked from behind, he practically screamed ‘I’m gay’.

XD oh my god. My best friend fits that description perfectly!

“Johnny likes romance, not just sex, he likes to go for walks and all the cheesy shit like that, he likes people that take the time to get to know him, not just take the time to get into his pants, the Johnny Christ you see on the stage isn’t the Johnny that we know, and that you will get to know when you write your number on this card and I give him the card”

SWEETNESS! *dances around*

smiling like an idiot.

Yup that would be me. (Oh yeah I forgot to mention I'm VERY clumsy)

Yea, you introduced her but didn't say her name. I know I sent you something about it, but I can't remember what I sent you. I am the highest ranking space cadet there is and I'ver worked hard to earn that title. Lovely update dearheart. Waiting for more!

wow! so i really love this story! it's so different from all the other a7x slashes i've read! keep up the great work!

he is blates preggers/ chav momet

:O Zacky puked everywere :P
well in a bucket but what the hey :D

awwwwwh!!! :cute: Synacky baby!!!

and sweetness (: (: (:

can't wait for the update xox

poor kid!

I jst hope this child gets Syn's DNA, seriously XD