Alone With You - Comments

No greasy food? Sounds like my mom when she was preggo with me. That and no fried foods. But yay! So cute. I want that picture of the two of them.

*dances*
Zacky's Gonna have Brians baby! And we all know it!! lol

More when you can, please

*hugs*

awwwh so sweet!!

:cute: can't wait for the update xox

and... HAHA I GOT 50TH CHAPTER!

ginge_vengeance:

OMG OMG OMG,

if I havent said before, well, stuff that, Ima gonna say it again anyway.

Q-Tip I LOVE YOU!

HAHA i think three cheers for her are in order,

hip hip, horay, hip hip, hor-
no? okay.

*does a little dance*

obviously me being excited isnt quite catching on lol.

*dances with you*
If I have said this before, I'll say it again to you...

*clears throat*
I LOVE YOU TO!
And i love this story!
and your other one to!
Can't wait for more updates!
YAY!

My breath hitched in my throat and my grip on Brian’s hand tightened

Great use of emotion

“its gonna be okay, whatever happens I will be there for you” he pulled me back into his chest as my tears became slower. I heard his soft voice kick in quietly as he begin to sing that oh so familiar song.

So cute!

Okay I have a little constructive critisism for you. When using lyrics, you treat it like a poem. After every line, until the last one in the stanza, you should put in comma's. I loved your chapter, but maybe you could add a little more details, try and wade out the emotions to make it stronger. It helps the reader feel like they're there with them, watching, and gives them a stronger connection to the charactor(s).

If you found my con crit annoying or anything, just tell me. I've had way too many people down my throat about being a bitch to them about giving them some advice. So if you don't want me to say anything, then I'll stick to comments like before. Just let me know. And you put up my banner :) Thanks

Two updates! YAY!! and maybe another one? :tehe: Can't wait hun!

OMG OMG OMG,

if I havent said before, well, stuff that, Ima gonna say it again anyway.

Q-Tip I LOVE YOU!

HAHA i think three cheers for her are in order,

hip hip, horay, hip hip, hor-
no? okay.

*does a little dance*

obviously me being excited isnt quite catching on lol.

You may like this but... I got bored and made a banner for this story. I wasn't going to send it to you but my friends convinced me...

*runs around house smiling and giggling at how cute their baby will be* *laughs at myself* I know... I'm weird... My family thinks so anyways XD
UPDATE DUDE!

:shock: Split condom?!

ooohs, do i sense a Synacky baby?

:XD:XD:XD love the update xox

omg omg omg omg i love it! write more plz ^^ keep up the good work ish awshum!

Zacky needs to be pregnant!

dude omg i hope syn dosnt regret that night

Again, Thank you for all of the comments and messages.

try out my new story, its in my signature =] lurve youu

GINGE

ooooh is something up with Syn?

teehees love it xox

This will sound bad or something but...
I HOPE HE'S PREGGERS! A BRI/ZEE BABY WOULD BE SO DAMN CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is GREAT

Aw, that was cute! I loved it, and I hope Matt and Jimmy take it okay.