Alone With You - Comments

haha i can imagine jimmy going at them with a baseball bat. i cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!

it's still cute though :)

NEW READER!
*waves hand in the air* LOL
I love this! Seriously, there aren't very many Zacky/Brian slash here.
So reading this made me really happy! Thank you! :)

Come on, let's see Zacky preggo with triplets! How insane would that be?! Three genetic melting pot copies of Syn and Venge. The world is not ready.

It so cute! I just love these little moments that pop up between lovers, their so nice and fluffy to read! Great job on this and can't wait to read the rest.

"go call you dog" i love this, it so diffrent :D

BAM there you go

OMG OMG OMG OMGGGGGGGGG

10 STARS!!! I LOVE YOU ALL!!!!!! I cant believe it.

THANK YOU

Ginge
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awwwh so sweet ^.^

this = amazingness!

hope to read more from you soon xox

i really like your story... I'm addicted to it, because the way you describe things is... very good! =) congratulations on your idea, it works perfectly ^^

*Green_Apple*

amazingly AMAZING update!!!

teehees love it xox

omg next update soon? :3 i<3this story

One rule, never trust delivery guys.

So far they all hit on me, stupid horny bastards! lol

‘we have to be on the road in five minutes’ ‘were going to be late for the next venue.’

Slap that bitch across tha face!

I bent down to see him grinning, all brown crooked teeth baring, pointing to his inflated crotch.

*cringes* Is disturbed for life!

I was right, I did look like a hooker.

But you'd be a sexy hooker! i'd tap dat! *laughs histarically*

“If you want food you can go out there and wait yourself,” I said not looking at them, plonking myself onto Brian’s lap and sighed.

“What’s the matter?” he said nuzzling his nose into my shoulder

“Nothing,” I snapped

“No there’s something up, tell me.”

“Well I was stood outside for like and hour, waiting for food that wasn’t even mine and what was mine I didn’t want, I had some fucking pervert drive up to me thinking I was a whore and to top it all off its fucking raining like a bitch out there.” I whined cuddling into him.

Awes! So fucking cute! *takes pictures* lol

“Well he obviously likes it because I can feel him smiling,” I just smiled even more

Damn right! Jimmy wished it was him! *sniffs air* do I smell a threesomeplaying out like a movie in Skippy's mind? (To those who don't know Skippy is one of Jimy's nicknames)

“I don’t know, whichever I guess, even though he would technically be the mom” if I weren’t asleep I would slap Brian.

Bad move dumb ass! *is talking to Brian*

“I have no idea, you know, I think I would be really happy if he was, but there’s only like a seven percent chance or something that he can get pregnant. But yeah, we may only have been together for like a day, but if he is pregnant, that’s like 9 months till we actually became parents, so I think I actually want him to be pregnant.”

If I wasn’t In a coma before I am definitely in a coma now.

I'd say he just made up for that mom comment! I hope so...

You make my day just by updating!

lmao omr Brian. Fantastic. Simply fantastic. But it does show commitment

BRIAN WANTS A BABA,

"if i wasnt asleep i would slap him" classic ... i get them sleeps, it annoying

BRIAN WANTS A BABA,

"if i wasnt asleep i would slap him" classic ... i get them sleeps, it annoying

I would just like to thank Q-Tip (again). I only have two stories on here atm and she had been fantastic with them both, she has commented nearly every chapter, randomly made me fantastic banners and the thing I love the most is that she doesn't leave comments like "OMG, this story is amazing... update?" Yeah I love them comments, but she actually picks out the mistakes that I make. And I love the way she quotes from the story, you don't see that very often.

So thank you to Q-tip and all of the other commenters, you are the only reason that I update.

Ginge
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this story is ... IMMENCE

*spazzes* O_o
zacky. girl? i like this story... please write more. ^_^

oooooh sweeet :cute:

love it xox

When I woke up I noticed that I was lying completely on top of Brian, his legs were spread with me lying on my side between them, his back was slightly raised up the headboard with my body resting on his stomach and my head buried between his chest and his neck. I could stay like this forever, but I had cramp in my leg, that’s probably what woke me up. I looked up at Brian who was sat there peacefully with his I-pod on, eyes closed, mouth moving to the lyrics. I reached up slowly, trying not to let him know I was awake, and quickly took the I-pod from his hand,

Very nice description use!

“aww, you woke up, you looked so cute, like a little dog. I even got Matt to take a picture of us, I think it should totally be our new myspace photo.”

I would love that! And so cute! Just a little note though, there should be a capitol at the beggining everytime someone talks after the quotation marks. And after the person is done talking, before the other quotation mark, you should include a comma, period, exclamaion point, or a question mark. Depending on what the person saying the line, means or is talking about. Do you get what I mean? Some of them don't have anything.

“I am not pregnant, if I was pregnant you would know by now, anyway my doctor said there’s like a 7 percent chance I can get pregnant, and that’s only if whoever’s sperm it is like rocket sperm.”

Well Zee, I guess that means Bri has rocket sperm! :lmfao

I wanna meet this doctor and know your problem inside and out, I am actually fascinated with it, its weird”

I find it very cute how he wants to know all about his situation. It made me awe!

“yes you are, but that’s why I love you” he said kissing my neck making me giggle.

“there you go, what 26 year old man giggles?” he continued

But I love his giggle!

when I saw him there with his hands covering his eyes,

“Matt you can look, were not naked.” Brian said kissing my shoulder gently. I was Matt move his hand.

We all know he'd look even if you were! *giggles*

I’m always up for greasy food, turning away pizza for a salad, something’s wrong with me today.

So preggers... My momwas the same way when she was preggers with me! *dances* Wait! Does that mean in some weird other demension, maybe, just maybe, Zacky is my dad? *looks around* That would be weird, but cool! *hugs dad* even though I love my real dad, that would still be fucking cool!