:) I like it. Muchly. Teehee. I like cute/shy Gerard :) Meeeeeeeeep. I only read up to chapter nine and now I have to go somewhere. But I shall read the rest as soon as I can :)
Keep up the good work.
And use commas after speech :) e.g. "Hello," Bob said. XD
omfg i love your story and i cant believe that bitch was takin gerard away frm minty well anyway please keep on writing your so good at it well bubi anna xoxoxoxo
But I still live it! More?