What a Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy - Comments

I just read this story, and I thought it was great :cute:
I loved that the first chapters were lies, leading us in a completely different direction, and after that we doubted everything. It was simple and perfect, not too long or too short.
Thank you very much for this story.
I have to ask, though; was there any real pupose for the video camera?

Well yay, look at weird old me....replying to a story that was finished months ago. **sighs** so yeah..... i loved it.... it was beautiful really........... plus the chapters were so short they make you feel smart :B

I really loved the ending. :)
great story!

Aw! Yay! They love each other! Sweet ending...but what happened to Brendon? You should do an epilogue on that.

LOVED THE STORY! EVEN THOUGH I CAME IN DURING THE MIDDLE OF IT!

oh my good golly gosh that was perfect!
I hate the endings where it's all like "and all was perfect in the world.
But I also hate it when it's like "and then none of them were happy."
your's, however, was perfect.
Happy in the fact that Ryan truly loved her and she loved him, and even though she hurt Brendon, she was sorry for it and didn't want it to happen again
-content sigh-
(: you're really an amazing writer

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! the story's finished?you have no idea how sad i am right now.but on the bright side, you wrote an amazing story so thank you!

SALLY! I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU. HAHAHA, THAT'S NOT CREEPY AT ALL.

twas a very beautiful ending. bittersweet feeling coming at me right now. haha

Awwhhh, that was incredibly cute of Ryan, i'm glad he loves her too :) Makes me smile like a lunatic
I didn't really have a favourite line, but i did like the whole...wait! I did! It was when "Brendon" knocked on teh window.
Anyways, well done :)
Sunny-Lee <3

WOO! He finally said it! He finally said it!

Ohkay, happy screamin' ovah.

Loved it! So sorry that the original got deleted. Update soon!

awww, i love this so much. i love jenny and ryan...even after everything happened. yayayayayay!!!

its a bittersweet feeling though, knowing that its almost going to be over.

i look like a right creeper commenting so many times. hahahaha, i dont care.

i know i already commented, but i am seriously dying for an update!!!

I totally understand why Brendon would do that
but it's still sad ):
more please

Finally!
It all makes sense!
You're such a terrific writer. I loved the updates. Please please please please PLEASE! Update really soon. I'm honestly dying to read more. =P

poor jenny,naah she deserves it.

Awwww, that made me really sad :(
More soon! I want to know what happens!

omg, i'm in love. i have an unhealthy obsession with this.

update soon? :D

Ha ha! I like how the secret wasn't that big... lol
But it was really sad about Jenny :( and Ryan/Brendon.
I feel bad for her, but she did go along with it, even if she was conned by love.
You got bangs? Do you have pictures?
Does this mean, now that we know the secret, that this is ending shortly?
Sunny-Lee <3

DUDE?! You had a friggin' snow day?! WTF. IT'S ONLY OCTOBER!

Nice chapter, btw. We ever gonna find out the secret? I'm itching to know!

Update soon, please!

amazing!

Oh no! Poor Jenny! I know that she kind of deserved what Brendon did to her because she stabbed him in the back, but you can't help but still feel sorry for her ! And oh my gosh, that Ryan. I don't know if anyone could be anymore of an asshole.