What a Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy - Comments

Oops, i forgot my favourite line, but it was the last paragraph thing in chapter 35, something about Jenny being sad because she knew that she'd hurt Brendon,a dnt hat the only other person whe knoe who would get hurt as bad had been Ryan.
*shrugs* it got me thinking, maybe that Brendon did something to Ryan... then the whole "Keep your friends close, but your enemies closer." thing went throug my mind.
Sunny-Lee <3

omg i couldnt open the internet for about 3 weeks and now i know what i missed.the story's kind of sad now though because everybodys getting hurt.not that its bad.keep it up! this story's my life!

Poor Brendon!
Very... mischevious Ryan.

ah i now i really want to know what the secret is. this story is amazing. more soon please. (:

I don't think I EVER commented on this one. O.O
Well I love this one also and I can't wait for a lot more updates! :D

Please more?

I love this story.
So much.

Seriously, if it was legal to marry stories, this story and I would elope...

That sounds silly.

Dude. FRIGGIN. AMAZING.

Now I wanna know what that secret is..SO BAD.

U.P.D.A.T.E. S.O.O.N.
:D

Dude, I wanna know wht the friggin secret is. CAN WE FIND OUT SOON?!

Update soon!

i love this story,
i really dont know what else to say because it just too amazing.
more soon :)

amazing updates. (: more soon?

Favourite line: Brendon took a cautious step toward me. I didn't move. Brendon took another step and I still didn't move. We were almost touching. He stayed there for a moment before reaching his arm out and placing his hand gently on my waist. When I still didn't move, he put his other hand on the other side of my waist and pulled me toward him, quickly leaning down slightly to kiss me.
- - - It was cute, I liked the way that Brendon was unsure, adn gave her the time to step away. :) It was nice.
Sunny-Lee <3

okay, I must say, I am oober jealous of Jenny right now.
She has Brendon AND Ryan!
hell! I'd kill for that (;
more soon! this is freaking amazing
I am so glad Ryan isn't all that creepy anymore x]

Ah! I'm itching to know wht tht secret is. Sorry for the lack of vowels over there.

Loved the chappie! Update soon!

Great story =]

(this is gonna sound mean)
I'm glad Ryan was upset with her sleeping with Brendon
even if it was his idea
idk y it was his idea
because you won't just say the secret
-dramatic sigh-
but this is still an amazing story (:
more please

*nods slowly*
Oh, damn, i forgot my favourite line.
Well it was when Jenny got her "revenge" on Ryan anyways.

So, I've found a confusion point! Aren't you proud of me?
I don't...wait, how to phrase this?
I don't think i'm aware if Ryan loves her, like what their relationship really is right now?
Like are they dating? Does he love her? Does SHE love HIM? How exactly did she get sucked into this plan?
So yeah... that's about the only confusion I've gotten out of this. :)
Also, thanks for the comment on my story :)
Sunny-Lee <3

that was sad, but really cute.
you need to out more up soon!
but really, this is an amazing story, it really is

lol.
'i had to get revenge'
that made me laugh.
two thumbs up for awesome!

Aw, Ryan's so sweet in this chapter! Great job, too!

AMAZING. I'm totally addicted. its actually unhealthy!!!