What a Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy - Comments

dude..brendon didn't know that jenny was taken by him!

see..we always want to kill the other person but it our partner that is at fault

man i really hope she gets through this

i feel bad for her, but at the same time i don't because she was kind of asking for it.
update soon?

drama stops.new drama begins.i love it!

O:
that was the secret? EEEEP
much better than my mad scientist idea (;
God, how could that have all been for revenge?
It was bad and all but come on
poor brendon ):
and poor Jenny ):
and poor Ryan ): (he got slapped, come on! lol)
-sigh-
more soon?

Well, isn't that just lovely. Fuck Ryan. I would tell Brendon and turn it all back around. Or at least just apologize and then tell Ryan to fuck off. Even if my hearts broken. Fucking prick.

woah.
ryan sucks.

revenge for what? or am i not supposed to know yet? THIS SUCKS, IM SO FREAKIN CURIOUS.
yay good for you,i love bangs.their so like poppy and flippy in a way :D

Wow. Gawd this story is so frustrating. I don't know whats going on half of the time. But its still oh so addicting. I think I'm experiencing a love/hate relationship with it. =) Keep it up!

Revenge? For what? I must know!

Oh. Hot Damn. Well, that was a small doozy right there.

I hate not knowing what the secret is. Cause then this would all make sense. But now it doesn't make sense, cause I don't know what the friggin secret is.

Yeah, I'm ranting cause I'm stuck at a wedding reception right now and there's no way home. God, I really wish I was home.

Well, update soon!

that was intense.
It was amaizng, and intense.. Amazingly intense.
More soon! I wanna know what happens!

I love your story I NEED MORE!!!!
I need to know what that secret is!

omg, i'm dying here. i can't wait for the next chapter. i still dont know what the hell the secret is. OH MY GODDD. i cant take the suspense. do you see me freaking out here???? jesus.

i have a feeling shes going to pick brendon, but ohhh, i want her to pick ryannnnnn.

awh, how could she do that to Brendon?
I get hat she's madly in love with Ryan, but he's being a freaking asshole
more soon?

ahhh im so excited right now! :D

ah i can't wait till the next update. (:

YAY! It's gonna start soon. Now I'm excited.

Update soon! XD

duh duh duhhhhh. I feel some very intense thing coming.. And it excites me!
More soon! I need to know what happens! :)

This is getting very very intense, I want to know what happens. :)
MORE MORE MORE!!!
:)

ahh, i love this story even more.
i can't wait to know what this secret is!