Eyes of a Tragedy - Comments

The perfect tragedy...

wow Ripley. you should write one shots more often, you killed it! it was intense and emotional and descritptive and empathetic and you fucking own me now this was amazing. and i think i've commented before but i dont care your idea and the scene and the plot just totally tripped me out.

i love it!

i love it!! i luv the ending!

wow...that was incredible. When he says 'But it’s Frank.…”.' at the end, oh my...I just felt so heartbroken for him. His naivety, and Gerard's indifference, were so well potrayed i just couldn't help but feel so hurt for Frank and angry towards Gerard.

'I knew I had got to him, knew I had been different from the others...those pretty little boys in over their heads'. This line has so much impact when, at the end, we find out that gerard never really cared.
I making this into three-parts could be an excellent idea!

*next lol

poor frank!
ughh...

i can't wait for the nest chapter!

Ugh!
I hate you Gerard!
No wait!
I love you!
*confused*
lol anyway, that was amazing! really dark and intense, yet it had this fragile, beautiful delicate quality to it.
okay, I'm rambling now...
Well done, you have a talent!:):):)

Traitor Iero.:

So Sad..

-hugs Frank-
It's okay, I always know your name if you wanna fuck sometime

ROFL.
hahaha.
Odd twist; i thought it was going to turn out happy. But it didn't, and Im impressed.
<3

very intense, very good! i love it...

GERARD WAS BEING A BITCHFACE!! poor frankie!

very different from fuel this flame, but i loved it!
which reminds me, UPDATE FUEL THIS FLAME!!!!

BLADDY AMAZING.
i freakkkking LOVED.
it.
i like how its completly different from your other story which i also LOVE.
An update would be amazing aswell :]
xxx

i just thought I would comment AGAIN. i re-read it...and its just as good as I remember *grins*

i know its a tuffy deciding to continue or not. with Teardrops on my guitar, i continued and pretty much made it suck. it got all happy and corny. i didnt like it. but it happened. i would have rather let Frank die. (morbid i know)

BUT ANYWHO... take everything everyone has said into consideration, but mainly follow your own mind...

That was oh, so amazing... You're
such a talented writer, I'm sure you
could make even the shittiest story
(not that any of your stories are!) look good. :')
You should write some more stories...

gah that made me so sad, it was so beautiful in such a twisted way, i loved how you ended it, pretty much tore my heart out.
Such a perfect one shot

I think she said it all, really.

:]

It's perfect as it is, I reckon. Although saying that, you did leave it quite open-ended.

I love that song, Three Libras by A Perfect Cirlcle! I used it in a fic too, but on a different site. :)

I loved the description, and the characterization was just so... intense. You made Gerard a thousand times crueler, and Frank just got caught in his wicked web. The wording of the rejection, 'Like I give a fuck,' I think increased its harshness, especially after he demanded Frank scream his name.

This was perfectly written. I kind of can't find anything wrong with it. The concept went well too... and... oh man, it was just the contrary of Fuel The Flame! I love your stuff, I really do. I hope you make more stories... you are on my top 10 authors list on this site. :)

I'm babbling incoherence again... Your stuff has this effect on people.

Awestruck. :D

And FINALLY, a Frerard that doesn't end up happy without anyone dying...

Ohyeah, it's good as a oneshot. I read your journal, and I can relate with the temptation to add to it, but if you really must, maybe you should post the sequel as another story. I dunno, just a thought. This just works so well, the bittersweet reality of it, the somewhat tragic ending...

ahh
gerard is evil...
sweet shit
but OMG i think u should continue it
its soo good
and very different from fuel this flame
deff continue it
its sooo amazing

That was Intense.
And Really Good. but Poor Frank, Gerard's a meanie. o.0

I was intrigued by this... as I was reading it, I tried to forget the obvious - that the two characters are Gee and Frankie
I had a feeling there would be a twist and the 'other person' who's perspective it's written in, would be a woman - and for a moment, to me, it seemed like it could be a woman.

or am I completely insane....

anyway, I loved it... and you should continue xx

Wuh-oh.

That was amazing, really different to FTF.

I haaavee a neeew obsesssioonnn. :tehe:

Oh. My. God.

This was good. Like, really, really good. I've been trying to read this for the longest time, but I was always busy. I'm so glad that I finally got the time to read it.This was fabulous. Especially with the song in the background... The song stopped at the same time I finished, btw. Spooky.

Amazing, amazing... This almost had me crying.

Elena.

EDIT: I want more too! I would love more...

that was awesome!!!! Yea!!! Poor Frankie though u.u aww... mean Gerard...