Eyes of a Tragedy - Comments

you are NOT allowed to make this a one shot. you have to write more!! its too amazing to just leave it there... common, pleeeeaseee???

oh gosh; your stories are amazing
it was so good, like the emotions and everything, you capture it so good :D

lol Im crying in class. XD
That was so sad... TT_TT
But good, nice job!

Thanks so much for your comments, everyone! I was actually a bit unsure about posting this story because it is so different from FTF, but it's great to know people liked it.

I am thinking about turning it into a three-parter only...I actually posted a journal on it but it seems to have disappeared into the Mibba abyss...so if anyone wants to let me know if they want more or to leave it alone, please comment....thanks to those that already have...

And once again thank you so much for commenting...it means the world to me!

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wow.....that was amazing.....no lie....."but its frank."
i can just see him lying there like an angel with his wings ripped off broken and crying.....damn ripley....you done good.

That was such an apt comparison.

Soo sad, evil Gerard!

So Sad..

-hugs Frank-
It's okay, I always know your name if you wanna fuck sometime

ROFL.
hahaha.
Odd twist; i thought it was going to turn out happy. But it didn't, and Im impressed.
<3

wow.....that was amazing.....no lie....."but its frank."
i can just see him lying there like an angel with his wings ripped off broken and crying.....damn ripley....you done good.

miss ripley that caught me off guard ! omeegahd . :D

love it . but it's a oneshot , isn't it ?

ripley:

bellaxmuerte0:

that was intense.

That was the point...but was it any good?

Thanks for commenting..... :D

yesh, intense but really good.
or intense AND really good, actaully

Gaah! I read your journal and NO, do not under any circumstances add onto it. If you do add, keep it at or under five chapters and do not get rid of the whole "indifferent Gerard" thing. I love that. I think you should make it like, Frank's still into him and the next night Gee ignores him and in the end, nothing really changes.

I don't want them to fall in love in your story. But then again, it's your story and I can't really control it. Still. This is a plea.

i dont care whether it was different its still superb!!!
i love reading!!!
libby
keep going
type type type

I already told you what I think, but I want the world to know!
It's amazing rip, it really is. Kind of haunting, or maybe thats the song, but you got so much emotion in such a short story and it was a clever set up so it worked perfectly.


Ripley for author of the month on INO!

shit!!! that was really really good!!!

and the song <3<3<3 i love apc!!!
really good fic !

Very good. I agree, intense. Yet there are people like those characters in this world...

M

awesomme aw lol poor frankie
i agree with basically everyone here.
really really good :]

Wow that was fucking fantastic! You created an entirely different mood, equally as brilliant and as well written as fuel this flame.

I loved how dark it was, could understand frank's feelings perfectly.
Just amazing for lack of a better word. I don't won't to push you as this is a perfect oneshot but i love the play on the characters, any chance of a bit more?

Whoa, it iS the anti-Fuel....It's very well written, but I'm not liking the icky feeling in the pit of my stomach now.....:cry: A Fuel update will make it all better, though....

Ripley, that was flippin' awesome. I loved the way you captured the whole thing so perfectly and gave it that... Hm... Frayed and dingy feeling?
Totally different from Fuel This... but amazing nevertheless.

OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD! It is wrong that I cried at the last few lines?

That was so incredible....