We'll Pour Our Hearts Out On The Screen - Comments

All I can say is absolutely beautiful! Well written and a pleasure to read!

Tom Milsom lyric?

I just found this and I LOVE it. It's really well written.

The ending is really sweet. And yay for Frank not actually dating the other guy!

So yeah I really enjoyed reading this!

Okay, I just finished reading this and I thought I'd leave you a comment.
Of course, as with most authors there's always things to improve upon, but I was happily surprised by this.
Not really that original, and quite predictable, however if that's what you're in the mood for - it's perfect!
I wanted to read an easygoing Frerard. Something that wouldn't make me want to cry my eyes out, and something that didn't involve murder/gunfights/etc. I wanted to read a Frerard that had a good plot, without involving anything except for romance. Because really, love is complicated enough and doesn't need murder/rape/etc to create an interesting plot.

Like I said, many clichés, very predictable - but cute, to the point and it delivered.
I started reading this (after reading the last bit, I always do that cos I simply can't stand reading stories that end miserably) knowing full well what I would get, but I don't care.
I started reading this, looking for exactly what I got.

It's like when you go to the movies and see a romantic comedy. You know what's going to happen, and there's always a billion clichés, but you still watch it. And you're still entertained.

So I'm going to reccomend this story on my twitter, because this is an easy reading. There's too few easy readings out there. I'm going to read "Romance" by you now, because I have to go to bed in a bit and that one was a good lenght. You can count on a comment on that story too.

I hope it delivers too.

So with this comment I wanted to say: Don't be offended when people say your stories are using every single cliché, or when people say it's mushy. It's your thing to write, and you deliver exactly what you promise. A mushy cliché, but with quality.

Take care.

argh. ok i just read ALL of this in one sitting. hahaha. and i LOVED it. i mean jesus effing christ i loved it. and the final chapter made me smile and blush a little.

HAHA.

it was awesome. very fuckin well written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

xxx jess

aww i cried at this story almost every chapter!! it was amazing i loved it i felt so sorry 4 Gee when he fought Frankie had a boyfriend! *Gasp*

this is probs 1 of my all time fav mibba stories ever :D

One of the best stories I've read in so long, so great, and I loved the ending lots too, Jesus, nothing could be better than this right now.

: D

just read this and i loved it! A+

Aw, that was so adorable. :cute:
I really loved this story!

There are not enough words to describe how brilliant this story has been! Seriously I could go on forever...
I am so sad it's over!
Absolutely perfect ending though, I LOVED it!
I can't wait for more, you are my favourite frerard writer by far!!!!!
xox

aww great story
the ending was awesome
=D

this Horrid romance:

What a lovely ending!!!
I'm kinda sad that it ended tho.
*sigh* I wish my online relationship ended that way

Aww. Don't we all? :(

*stands and applauds*
BRAVO!!! lol that was awesome!!! its now my favourite frerrard story, and believe me i have read loads of them!! haha thanks so much!!!
<3 :D

What a lovely ending!!!
I'm kinda sad that it ended tho.
*sigh* I wish my online relationship ended that way

-huggles emma- Perfect ending!

*cries more*
Best. Story. Ever.

.... =D
that was great!!
like omg, i figured they might get together, but you made it magical!!!
... im done now.
really great job!

Thank the LORD you didn't make them have sex as soon as they met in the flesh.
Seriously, had you made them do that, I would have groaned out of frustration.
This story was strung so well, that would just ruin everything because honestly, what sort of relationship would it be if they had sex within the first few hours of actually meeting each other?
Anyways it's a shame it's ended, I had lots of fun reading it :3 Everyone's happy now yaaay.
Hurray for more stories underway!
(that rhymed.)

Awwee

I Bloody Loved That

>.<

Pfft
X

OHMYGOD,
im sad it over. but im HAPPY it was a good ending :D
i almost cried from how cute and sweet that was <3
good work!