i listened to the song. i'm crying now, i'm thinking of all the people i know who've died in the past year. i don't know why the good go before the bad. it brings me to the old saying, Why do the good die young?
Wow. Ok, so I just started reading this story today, and I was hooked. I've had people close to me commit suicide, and I've dealt with stuff similar to what Lily did in the story, and the way you're writing it and making sense of it is just heartbreaking. It really shows how little things can build up like that to create a bigger problem. I'm not going to lie, I normally avoid stories with suicide in them, just because they tend to be overly cliched, and that made me a little reluctant to this, but I have to say, I love it. It's sad, and it makes me think, which is rare to find.
Anyway, now that I've rambled... I love the story and I can't wait for more. :)
Oh wow. Poor Lily....why...who? Even if you don't like someone....how could u walk in on that and be fine with it? And walk out and say nothing? Tell no one? Wow that really, really irks me. Anyways awesome chapter and please update soon.
i love this story
im sad its ending
she was raped aw poor her... just awww