Great so far! Keep it up! I like the Brian stories. But there need to be more Johnny stories out there! Does nobody care about the bassist?! Just kidding haha. (lovee.)
This is an awesome story. But I hate Lily. I really do. Like... not who she is, but what she did. How she didn't tell anyone (I mean, seriously. I've written stuff like she has and I'm not going to go shoot/cut myself.) and just for the fact that she killed herself. It's harsh, I know and I sound like a total bitch.. but it's true.
I hate suicide, I hate it when people do it. They are cowards, cowards who need love and who are fantastic, but cowards none the less. I know this will start a fight, but it needs to be said. It hurts so much when you think of what they've gone through, but... I don't know. I just don't like it. It's not worth it.
I'd say more, but I'm going to cry (your story is so good, and it's such a touchy subject for me...) so yeah...
More soon?:cute: